The mass media including TV, Radio and newspaper influence our society and shape our opinions and characters. What is your opinion?
Mass media including TV, Radio and newspaper have an impressive impact and reach across the globe. It is argued that mass media has a strong influence in shaping thoughts and behaviour of people using its powerful audio and visual content. The following discussion analyzes how mass media helps spread awareness on health issues and its usefulness as an educational tool.
Television, newspaper and radio are a source of knowledge, information and news. Programs on TV and radio and publications in newspapers often carry information pertaining to various health issues and their remedies. For example, a television show on harmful effects of smoking and drug abuse can help influence the minds of the audience and may inspire them to give up these harmful habits and become a better person.It is evident, therefore, that mass media can help bring about a positive change in the lives of people.
Further, a number of television programs and newspaper articles cover new research and development on a variety of subjects. For example, people sitting in remote corners of the globe can learn more about new advancements in the automobile industry by watching a television program on the subject. Armed with new knowledge people can make better decisions and actions. It is clear from the above discussion that mass media can shape our opinion on various topics.
In conclusion, television, radio and newspaper not only make people aware of health issues but also increase their knowledge of current research and developments. The foregoing discussion corroborates the view that mass media has a significant influence on our society and help shape our opinions and characters. It is expected that mass media will continue to be a tool to spread knowledge and bring about a positive change in people’s life.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: It
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, so, therefore, for example, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 10.5418719212 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 6.10837438424 115% => OK
Conjunction : 22.0 8.36945812808 263% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 5.0 5.94088669951 84% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 20.9802955665 86% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 31.9359605911 116% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.75862068966 122% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1527.0 1207.87684729 126% => OK
No of words: 292.0 242.827586207 120% => OK
Chars per words: 5.22945205479 5.00649968141 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13376432452 3.92707691288 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82639249894 2.71678728327 104% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 139.433497537 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.530821917808 0.580463131201 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 473.4 379.143842365 125% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 4.0 1.56157635468 256% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.65517241379 27% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.5024630542 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.5277331527 50.4703680194 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.461538462 104.977214359 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4615384615 20.9669160288 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.69230769231 7.25397266985 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 6.9802955665 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 2.75862068966 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.334685812814 0.242375264174 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.124547372371 0.0925447433944 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.135159509443 0.071462118173 189% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.200146102163 0.151781067708 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0852402577087 0.0609392437508 140% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 12.6369458128 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 53.1260098522 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.9458128079 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.35 11.5310837438 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.89 8.32886699507 107% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 55.0591133005 140% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.94827586207 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.3980295567 104% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.