Mass media plays an important role in peoples ideas.
Public opinion is greatly influenced by Media. It plays a very important role in conveying information and help people in influencing towards opinions made. This essay will discuss how mass media plays an important role in daily life of people.
Every days happening can be communicated with the help of mass media. TV visualizes the news form various parts of the
world, in different languages in a faster rate of time. For example The Discovery channel telecasts nature,animal kingdom etc which can be a knowledge for children and elders also. The election voting polls updates every minute is being frequently updated by News channels. This shows how media is effective for the public.
Radio is a wireless mean of communication that provides information from different parts of the world. For example the AIR (All India Radio) is one of the oldest radio station since 1950 has been reading news in three different languages. Radio also serves as a source of entertainment by playing music and other entertainment based shows. The improvement in technology has made the world to communicate faster and better.
This essay states how mass media plays an important role in improvising public ideas. In my opinion media plays an important role in helping people to update day to day information the surroundings. Mass media indicates the fact "How communication is effective in modern days?"
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: EACH_EVERY_NNS[1]
Message: 'Each' and 'every' are used with singular. Did you mean 'all'?
Suggestion: All
...ortant role in daily life of people. Every days happening can be communicated with...
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Line 4, column 108, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , animal
...e The Discovery channel telecasts nature,animal kingdom etc which can be a knowledge fo...
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Line 4, column 141, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[2]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'knowledge'.
Suggestion: knowledge
... nature,animal kingdom etc which can be a knowledge for children and elders also. The elect...
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Line 4, column 177, Rule ID: ALSO_SENT_END[1]
Message: 'Also' is not used at the end of the sentence. Use 'as well' instead.
Suggestion: as well
... be a knowledge for children and elders also. The election voting polls updates ever...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, for example, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.5418719212 95% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 6.10837438424 49% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 8.36945812808 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 5.94088669951 34% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 6.0 20.9802955665 29% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 31.9359605911 88% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 5.75862068966 174% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1188.0 1207.87684729 98% => OK
No of words: 227.0 242.827586207 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.23348017621 5.00649968141 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.88156143495 3.92707691288 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87600089778 2.71678728327 106% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 139.433497537 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.577092511013 0.580463131201 99% => OK
syllable_count: 368.1 379.143842365 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6551724138 119% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.5024630542 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 23.7162860124 50.4703680194 47% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 79.2 104.977214359 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.1333333333 20.9669160288 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.66666666667 7.25397266985 37% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.12807881773 121% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.33497536946 75% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 6.9802955665 129% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 2.75862068966 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 2.91625615764 206% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.400621534352 0.242375264174 165% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.135351000446 0.0925447433944 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.16991085399 0.071462118173 238% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.227763418029 0.151781067708 150% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.222245377117 0.0609392437508 365% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 12.6369458128 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 53.1260098522 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.9458128079 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.46 11.5310837438 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.69 8.32886699507 104% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 55.0591133005 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.94827586207 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.3980295567 77% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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