Individuals can do nothing to improve the environment; only governments and large companies can make a difference.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
You should write at least 250 words.
Environmental degradation, which means the destruction of the environment by manmade activities has become a heavy threat in today’s world. The idea that only governments and multi-national organizations can help to improve the environment is still a controversy whereas, individuals can also contribute towards this aspect. In my opinion, individuals can help with the betterment of the environment.
When it comes to huge organization or rather a government, they constitute a group of individuals who work there and still the concern of the individuals in beginning the relevant measures for helping the environment. Once, human being implements a change, it would provide an inspiration for others thus, would be the beginning of a difference. For example, to produce papers million of trees are cut down every year, if an individual chooses to save one sheet of paper a day it would create a difference of saving thousands of trees every day.
On the other hand, organizations can spread awareness among their employees and could provide suggestive measures such as using public transport, providing tree saplings and so on. When Individuals begin to follow certain practice like avoiding materials that highly disturb the environment, it could make a positive impact by motivating others. For example, they can avoid purchasing plastic bags while shopping, which is non-biodegradable and contaminates the soil, instead can carry cloth bags when going to stores.
In my opinion, I disagree with the fact that only organizations can make a huge difference in preserving the environment but also it is the responsibility of the individuals who should be concerned about the environment.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Use simply: 'a million'.
Suggestion: a million
...ference. For example, to produce papers million of trees are cut down every year, if an...
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Line 4, column 18, Rule ID: AGREE_WITH_THE_FACT[1]
Message: Use simply 'disagree that'.
Suggestion: disagree that
...when going to stores. In my opinion, I disagree with the fact that only organizations can make a huge diff...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, still, thus, whereas, while, for example, such as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1436.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 264.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.43939393939 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03089032464 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.30507998678 2.80592935109 118% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.602272727273 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 450.0 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 41.7176221758 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 143.6 106.682146367 135% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.4 20.7667163134 127% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.2 7.06120827912 144% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.186434299502 0.244688304435 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0782129505345 0.084324248473 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.047471525507 0.0667982634062 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119396825408 0.151304729494 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.032086699064 0.056905535591 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.4 13.0946893788 133% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.63 50.2224549098 73% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.57 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.99 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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