Medical technology is responsible for the human’s life expectancy. Discuss it.
One of the conspicuous trends of today's world is the colossal upsurge in advancement in medical technology and its corresponding impacts. The discussion on whether this technology is responsible for the increase in life expectancy is a debatable topic and people all around the globe are divided in their opinions. The subject attracts the majority of views from people and remains a hot topic among people of concern. In this essay, I shall scrutinize my opinion by providing relevant examples and explanations.
At the outset, there are myriad arguments in favor of my stance. The most preponderant one lies in the fact that the high medical technology has found the cure for many diseases. The most impeccable example that I could provide here is that a research proved that over the past years, scientists managed to cure over 1 million deadly diseases. Hence, I can substantiate my idea that advancements in medical technology play a vital role to increase the life expectancy.
Those who disagree with these ideas might have a cogent notion and could assert that changes in people's life style are the cause for this phenomenon. Another angle on this debate suggests that the increase on exercises and a healthy diet helped prevent diseases, therefore, it increased the life expectancy. The most pertinent example that could be provided here is that a research suggests that a healthy lifestyle is strongly linked with a long life.
To conclude, after taking the above-stated points into consideration, I am inclined to believe that the advancement in medical technology is prominent and should not be overlooked.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, if, look, therefore
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.5418719212 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 6.10837438424 115% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 8.36945812808 84% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 5.94088669951 202% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 27.0 20.9802955665 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 35.0 31.9359605911 110% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 5.75862068966 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1364.0 1207.87684729 113% => OK
No of words: 264.0 242.827586207 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.16666666667 5.00649968141 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03089032464 3.92707691288 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90774905922 2.71678728327 107% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 139.433497537 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.575757575758 0.580463131201 99% => OK
syllable_count: 438.3 379.143842365 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 5.0 1.56157635468 320% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.5024630542 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.8947513144 50.4703680194 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.666666667 104.977214359 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0 20.9669160288 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.16666666667 7.25397266985 30% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 2.91625615764 137% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.262957430329 0.242375264174 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0857828863154 0.0925447433944 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0801402767966 0.071462118173 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.139975317576 0.151781067708 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0480210030047 0.0609392437508 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 12.6369458128 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 53.1260098522 77% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 10.9458128079 120% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 11.5310837438 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.33 8.32886699507 112% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 55.0591133005 140% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.94827586207 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.3980295567 104% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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