Most alcoholics purchase liquor legally. According to your point of view, should stores in general be legally allowed to sell liquor to alcoholics?
The sale of alcohol has come into considerable limelight in recent years even though most of the alcohol is purchased legally. There has been an increasing demand on banning the sales of alcohol through stores. This essay will explain why the sale of alcohol should be strictly controlled through various measures but putting a complete ban on the sale is not the right step.
Alcohol is considered to be the most controversial beverage of recent times especially among teenagers. When consumed in large quantities, the person ends up losing his sense. This is the reason drinking under the influence of alcohol is heavily penalized in various countries. Therefore, it is necessary to have strict control on the sale of alcohol including the place of sale, age of person, permits of sale etc.
Whereas placing a complete ban on the sale of alcohol might lead to a backlash as it would increase black marketing. This is evident in most of the places where alcohol is banned such as Gujarat in India where it is estimated that the sale of alcohol through black marketers have crossed $ 1 million mark. This will lead to an increase in black money and will reduce the income earned from taxes on liquor adversely effecting the economy.
As most alcohol is sold legally it is still required that their sale be strictly monitored. This essay has described why a complete ban on alcohol will cause negative impact both socially as well as financially.
Comments
In the modern era, Alcoholic
In the modern era, Alcoholic purchase is legal process and it was run under government undertaken. It is one of the beverages used to consume lot of people like male from the age of 18. When they consume this, they are not in their control it will cause many of the problems. My incliantion falls under this view.
Firstly, Alcohol is good to health when it consume in a limit. Secondly, it was legal one. Most of the countires government are allowed to sell the liquior in shops. Thirdly, alcholic beverages is used for the beauty cosmetics as well. For instance, In India governemnt banned the liquior items to sell in shops and they started illegal bussiness due to the close of the alcohol shops the governemnt faces loss in finnacial problems. To overome the problems again government gives right to run the shops.
On the flip sides, Due to consume of beverages people commit lot of issues like they are not in control, behaviour of drunken was childish.In many places they advertise to not to drink to spoil their health and their family. While drink dont drive any vehicle due to this lot of accidents are happened.
In Conclusion, Many rules came for the liquor shops to not to sell. But people are enjoying while drinking, Not only in small shops, Liquior are selling in many big hotles. This is how the most alcoholic purchase are happened legally
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: The currency mark is usually written without any whitespace: '$1'.
Suggestion: $1
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Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...liquor adversely effecting the economy. As most alcohol is sold legally it is stil...
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Message: Probable usage error. Use 'and' after 'both'.
Suggestion: and
...ill cause negative impact both socially as well as financially.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, so, still, therefore, well, whereas, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 10.5418719212 142% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 6.10837438424 115% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 8.36945812808 24% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 5.94088669951 84% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 20.9802955665 62% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 31.9359605911 116% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 5.75862068966 17% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1202.0 1207.87684729 100% => OK
No of words: 246.0 242.827586207 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.88617886179 5.00649968141 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96035189615 3.92707691288 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57741836852 2.71678728327 95% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 139.433497537 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.548780487805 0.580463131201 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 385.2 379.143842365 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 4.6157635468 130% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 3.65517241379 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.5024630542 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.0159465475 50.4703680194 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.166666667 104.977214359 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5 20.9669160288 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.08333333333 7.25397266985 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.33497536946 56% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 6.9802955665 43% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 2.75862068966 254% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.233071096672 0.242375264174 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0982055557475 0.0925447433944 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0635826860744 0.071462118173 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.155063451228 0.151781067708 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.031478206937 0.0609392437508 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 12.6369458128 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 53.1260098522 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.9458128079 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.08 11.5310837438 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.93 8.32886699507 107% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 55.0591133005 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.94827586207 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.3980295567 96% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 72.2222222222 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 65.0 Out of 90
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