Music should be free or paid?
With the advent of technology, music these days is available online and can be played at any moment. Gone are those days where people had to buy compact discs for music and had to play them in a music player. These days all one needs is a mobile device and an internet connection to play music created in any part of the world. Now, some music is available for free and for someone has to pay to the music company. In my opinion, music should be paid for everyone and nothing should be free.
To begin with, these days people are able to listen to the songs on a various web application for absolutely free. This way artists who put in their effort to create music are not being paid well. Further, everyone knows that nobody values free things hence, in order to value the creativity music should not be provided to the public for free.
Although these days companies have changed their business model to gain profits from music. They launch a song by an artist on the web platforms like youtube and further earn money from advertisements. A portion of this money earned through advertisements then goes to the artists. This sort of business model is also fruitful for the artists and music composers.
To conclude, in the era of modernization where the competition is intense, nothing should be free. Music should be paid and the artists should be financially sound so that they can create good music without worrying about their financial needs.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 107, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'is'.
Suggestion: is
...e and can be played at any moment. Gone are those days where people had to buy comp...
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Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Although” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... be provided to the public for free. Although these days companies have changed their...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, so, then, well, as to, sort of, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 10.5418719212 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 6.10837438424 131% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 8.36945812808 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 5.94088669951 84% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 20.9802955665 81% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 31.9359605911 116% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.75862068966 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1202.0 1207.87684729 100% => OK
No of words: 256.0 242.827586207 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.6953125 5.00649968141 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0 3.92707691288 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.41929045561 2.71678728327 89% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 139.433497537 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.54296875 0.580463131201 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 367.2 379.143842365 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.57093596059 89% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.65517241379 164% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6551724138 111% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.5024630542 88% => OK
Sentence length SD: 22.0888742888 50.4703680194 44% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 85.8571428571 104.977214359 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2857142857 20.9669160288 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.21428571429 7.25397266985 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 6.9802955665 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.531238266237 0.242375264174 219% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.193984969907 0.0925447433944 210% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.184481357316 0.071462118173 258% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.361207888086 0.151781067708 238% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.179310080616 0.0609392437508 294% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 12.6369458128 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 53.1260098522 132% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.9458128079 72% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.98 11.5310837438 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.37 8.32886699507 88% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 55.0591133005 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.94827586207 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.3980295567 88% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.5123152709 95% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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