Nowadays, it is increasingly more difficult to maintain the right balalcne between work and other aspects of one's life, such as leisure time with family memebers. How important do you think in this balance? why do people find it hard to achieve?
Irrefutably, the topic of maintaining the right balance between work and other important aspects of life has become a heated debate among organizations. Although many people assert that there should be proper work timing, others refute this proposal arguing that professional life is more important. This essay will discuss why there should be fixed working hours for employees in order to achieve certain life goals and will reach a logical conclusion.
There are many factors which ascertain why people should work within defined timings within the industry in which the most preponderant one is that it will provide some leisure time for family, and it will help people to relax. Furthermore, people who tend to work extra working hours seems to have no personal life and thereby resulting in conflicts in marital life. For example, a recent study revealed that people who remain busy in their professional life instead of spending time with loved ones left alone in future life. Apparently, it is proved that why specific working hours are necessary for a successful life.
Another pivotal aspect of this argument is that extra working leads to many health issues like hypertension, heart diseases, and many more. Moreover, many organizations force workers for overtime thereby consequences are drastic in terms of pour health. For instance, a recent survey proved that about 80% of employees in organizations which do not care for them have severe health problems. Consequently, extra work only leads to negative health impacts.
In conclusion, this essay discussed why people should not work extra hours in terms of less family time and detrimental health. Therefore, in my opinion, companies should not force workers for extra working hours to achieve yearly targets.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 497, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
...ife instead of spending time with loved ones left alone in future life. Apparently, ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
apparently, consequently, furthermore, if, moreover, so, therefore, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.5418719212 85% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 6.10837438424 147% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 8.36945812808 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 5.94088669951 202% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 17.0 20.9802955665 81% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 31.9359605911 100% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 5.75862068966 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1501.0 1207.87684729 124% => OK
No of words: 283.0 242.827586207 117% => OK
Chars per words: 5.3038869258 5.00649968141 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10153676581 3.92707691288 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63212699107 2.71678728327 97% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 139.433497537 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.554770318021 0.580463131201 96% => OK
syllable_count: 464.4 379.143842365 122% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.5024630542 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.0869759752 50.4703680194 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.461538462 104.977214359 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.7692307692 20.9669160288 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.46153846154 7.25397266985 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 2.75862068966 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.259776891607 0.242375264174 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0978295452878 0.0925447433944 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0597850427992 0.071462118173 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.158295731788 0.151781067708 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0672610073605 0.0609392437508 110% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 12.6369458128 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 53.1260098522 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.9458128079 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.46 11.5310837438 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.25 8.32886699507 111% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 55.0591133005 149% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.94827586207 136% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.3980295567 100% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.5123152709 133% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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