Nowadays, television is an essential part of our lives, as a medium to spread news and awareness, and, for some, it even acts as a companion. What is your opinion about this?
Now in the modern era, technology is increasing day by day. Some individuals says that the television play very vital role in human life .While, other says that it act like companion only. I will discuss both views and my own opinion in upcoming paragraphs with suitable examples.
On the one hand, to see the television is very important for all people because they give the very useful information. Some people they can only see television for entertainment and the relaxation of of mind. For example, when the individuals are do work for long period of time the brain was not working properly and they see the television to feel brain stress out and fell very good. Further, it is very good source for gain the more information about other countries or celebrities.Also they give the awareness about dangerous things.
On the other hand, many individuals says that it only act like companion. when the person are alone at home they cannot feel bore because they have television to see certain news or movies. In one television there have many channels like, news, entertainment, business, movies, fashion and devotional.
In conclusion, every coin has to side, likewise, this topic also has mixed bag. But according to opinion people see the television for limited time because to see more television is effected on our eyes and also on our brain. But the television is very useful for all.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, likewise, so, while, as to, for example, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 10.5418719212 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 6.10837438424 49% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 8.36945812808 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 5.94088669951 84% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 20.9802955665 81% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 31.9359605911 85% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.75862068966 69% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1166.0 1207.87684729 97% => OK
No of words: 237.0 242.827586207 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.91983122363 5.00649968141 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.92362132708 3.92707691288 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7040719004 2.71678728327 100% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 139.433497537 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.565400843882 0.580463131201 97% => OK
syllable_count: 377.1 379.143842365 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.5024630542 88% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.213441613 50.4703680194 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.6923076923 104.977214359 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2307692308 20.9669160288 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.76923076923 7.25397266985 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.33497536946 206% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 6.9802955665 129% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.19104325385 0.242375264174 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0725847818392 0.0925447433944 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0393687274396 0.071462118173 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118801240854 0.151781067708 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.029500292682 0.0609392437508 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 12.6369458128 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 53.1260098522 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.9458128079 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 11.5310837438 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.46 8.32886699507 90% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 55.0591133005 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.94827586207 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.3980295567 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.