Obesity is a serious problem in many countries, especially in rich countries. Discuss ways to solve the problem. Provide specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Weight gain has become a major concern not just in developed countries but worldwide. Often, people who are rich opted to have easy meal packages that are loads of ingredients that has detrimental effect on individual. In this essay, I wil discuss ways on how to decode the pandemic obesity.
Government authorities has the power to lower the prevalence of obesity. The department of health should impose strict monitoring at work or school canteens if they are offering nutrious drinks and food to individual. Also, officials should imply higher taxes to the food companies who produce junk food. in this way, people will discourage to buy overpricing products.
Other way to solve obesity is through exercise. Supplying a exercise equipments in open or public places will get the benefit of keeping fit as it is readily available for everyone. An example of this is, in Singapore and China, people are encourage to participate every morning to do tai chi and uses public physical exercising equipments. Health statics shows that people who lives in this countries has lesser obese and healthy. So therefore, providing physical activities for indivual has a vast effect on society.
This essay discussed on how to sustain good health and fight obesity by checking the establisment canteens selling healthy foods in cafeteria and engaging physical activities by supplying enough exercise equipments in publc. In my opinion, I therefore conclude that, government and community should work hand in hand to achieve healthy lifestyle.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 306, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: In
...e food companies who produce junk food. in this way, people will discourage to buy...
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Line 3, column 345, Rule ID: BUY_VBG[1]
Message: Did you mean 'by'?
Suggestion: by
... in this way, people will discourage to buy overpricing products. Other way to s...
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Line 5, column 59, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
... obesity is through exercise. Supplying a exercise equipments in open or public p...
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Line 5, column 251, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'participating'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'encourage' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: participating
...ngapore and China, people are encourage to participate every morning to do tai chi and uses pu...
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Line 5, column 388, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
... statics shows that people who lives in this countries has lesser obese and healthy....
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Line 5, column 433, Rule ID: SO_THEREFORE[1]
Message: Use simply 'So' or 'therefore'.
Suggestion: So; Therefore
...countries has lesser obese and healthy. So therefore, providing physical activities for indi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, therefore, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 10.5418719212 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 8.36945812808 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 5.94088669951 118% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 20.9802955665 67% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 31.9359605911 106% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.75862068966 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1295.0 1207.87684729 107% => OK
No of words: 245.0 242.827586207 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.28571428571 5.00649968141 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.95632099841 3.92707691288 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78792541387 2.71678728327 103% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 139.433497537 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.644897959184 0.580463131201 111% => OK
syllable_count: 409.5 379.143842365 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6551724138 111% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.5024630542 83% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 45.2703894755 50.4703680194 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.5 104.977214359 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5 20.9669160288 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.07142857143 7.25397266985 42% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.33497536946 112% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0818065546574 0.242375264174 34% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0311115798439 0.0925447433944 34% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.040763132357 0.071462118173 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0469139632574 0.151781067708 31% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0244888141436 0.0609392437508 40% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 12.6369458128 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 53.1260098522 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.9458128079 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.11 11.5310837438 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.7 8.32886699507 116% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 55.0591133005 147% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.94827586207 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.3980295567 85% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 72.2222222222 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 65.0 Out of 90
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