Obesity is a serious problem in many countries, especially in rich countries. Discuss ways to solve the problem. Provide specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
The most dangerous health issue nowadays is the obesity in different countries especially the rich. In this essay we are going to discuss the causes, reasons that effect directly on this major problem and will suggest some solutions too.
The obesity rates increased quickly last 20 years, based on some researchers in different universities in United States and United Kingdom. The researchers were looking for the reasons that may be responsible of the percentage increasing, and they found very interesting results. The food and especially fast food is the first criminal followed by people wrong habits while people eats their food. The study mentioned the technology development and the smart devices as well. As result for all causes that mentioned, people health effected badly, more diseases is hitting us, blood pressure, diabetes, gain weight, unclear vision and more diseases attacks people around the world caused by obesity.
The Researchers and huge number of institutes globally asked their governments to embrace their efforts and requirements to fight the obesity in scientific way. They recommend to work on some awareness campaigns to educate all people in different ages, and to build more centers to fight obesity in new ways because they consider this way is the first and easiest way to reach to largest number in very short time. Some reports from China lately shows a huge number of changes in their society comes after campaigns and more than 13% decrease in obesity rates last year.
However, the problem is not easy to be solved soon, but we have to be together to fight and to help others.
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- Obesity is a serious problem in many countries, especially in rich countries. Discuss ways to solve the problem. Provide specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 72
- Nowadays, people put in too much time at work and they seldom have time for a personal life. Discuss this issue and provide examples to support. 62
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, look, may, so, well, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.5418719212 95% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 6.10837438424 33% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 8.36945812808 155% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 5.94088669951 50% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 20.9802955665 76% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 31.9359605911 110% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 5.75862068966 17% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1362.0 1207.87684729 113% => OK
No of words: 266.0 242.827586207 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.12030075188 5.00649968141 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03850299372 3.92707691288 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51797764701 2.71678728327 93% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 139.433497537 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.59022556391 0.580463131201 102% => OK
syllable_count: 416.7 379.143842365 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 4.6157635468 22% => OK
Article: 7.0 1.56157635468 448% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.931034482759 322% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 3.65517241379 27% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.5024630542 117% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.5552117165 50.4703680194 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.818181818 104.977214359 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.1818181818 20.9669160288 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.63636363636 7.25397266985 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.33497536946 75% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 2.75862068966 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.132303166193 0.242375264174 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0485480068792 0.0925447433944 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0391692677049 0.071462118173 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0894258357068 0.151781067708 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0467013170408 0.0609392437508 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 12.6369458128 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 53.1260098522 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.9458128079 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 11.5310837438 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.16 8.32886699507 110% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 55.0591133005 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.94827586207 116% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.3980295567 112% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.5123152709 124% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 72.0 Out of 90
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