The only effective way to deal with unemployment is to introduce rapid urbanisation. How far you agree?

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The only effective way to deal with unemployment is to introduce rapid urbanisation. How far you agree?

Recently, the phenomenon of rapid urbanisation and its corresponding effect has sparked an on going controversy which leads to a moot question, can urbanization increase the rate of employment. where many believe that development of mega cities can help to deal with the issue. however, some critics hold the opposite view. This essay will discussed both the arguments and leads toward a plausible conclusion.

To begin with, there are numerous reason why development of mega cities a major reason in increasing job opportunity. firstly, urbanization help to create opportunities in almost all sectors. New industries provide the job choices for society. Secondly, industrialization accompanied by better housing, school, medical and quality transportation. Hence, quality and life expectancy can be seen.

Nevertheless, pivotal facet pertaining to this argument is that despite the merits of urbanization, the are many demerits we overlook. One of the biggest disadvantage of this notion is uneven population distribution which leads to change in demographics. The urban areas are densely populated than rural areas. For instance, Dhaka is one of the most populated city in Bangladesh, rest country population is dwindling. The trend lead to a neglect of the villages which have not been touched by government.

In addition, poor living condition, a sudden demographics shift can be overwhelming. The changes are not properly mapped out. Hence, illegal houses increase and results in less medical resources, high rate of crime and mental illness etc.

To end, urbanization is a short-term solution to unemployment, it would better to build urban hubs and mega cities. government should focus on other means to develop opportunities for public by also providing the society with education and other skills to get appointed.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, hence, however, if, look, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, for instance, in addition, to begin with

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.5418719212 104% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 6.10837438424 115% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 8.36945812808 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 5.94088669951 101% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 20.9802955665 38% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 31.9359605911 125% => OK
Nominalization: 23.0 5.75862068966 399% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1541.0 1207.87684729 128% => OK
No of words: 278.0 242.827586207 114% => OK
Chars per words: 5.54316546763 5.00649968141 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08329915638 3.92707691288 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.21610294475 2.71678728327 118% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 139.433497537 129% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.647482014388 0.580463131201 112% => OK
syllable_count: 485.1 379.143842365 128% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 6.0 1.56157635468 384% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 12.6551724138 150% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.5024630542 68% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.2058863356 50.4703680194 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.1052631579 104.977214359 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.6315789474 20.9669160288 70% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.78947368421 7.25397266985 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.12807881773 121% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.33497536946 169% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 2.75862068966 290% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 2.91625615764 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0499748297708 0.242375264174 21% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0121658128861 0.0925447433944 13% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0260688198958 0.071462118173 36% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0264638076118 0.151781067708 17% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0323561405336 0.0609392437508 53% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 12.6369458128 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 48.81 53.1260098522 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.9458128079 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.26 11.5310837438 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.67 8.32886699507 116% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 55.0591133005 171% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.94827586207 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.3980295567 73% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.5123152709 95% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.

Rates: 11.1111111111 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 10.0 Out of 90
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