Space travel is fantastic these days, but there are many issues – such as environmental problems – that we should be focusing on. What are your views on the allocation of public funding?
Recently, the phenomenon of Space travel has sparked an ongoing controversy which leads to moot question, Is going to space more important than solving other major issues. Whereas some believe government should assign extra funds for problem like pollution and other, however, many believe travel and exploring space will help human to understand what’s surrounds us. In this essay both sides of argument will be discussed with related examples.
From the social standpoint, there are many reason why more funds are required for issues such as environmental pollution, global warming, poverty, education facilities, infrastructure etc, but one of the most conspicuous one stems from the fact that air pollution has increased at an exponential rate which give birth to life threatening problems like asthma, cancer and many more. For instance, recent evidence suggests that if measures are not been taken properly, world will see decline in life expectancy. Hence, proper use of funding, less use of carbon emotion products and proper awareness can lead to restrict this problem.
Nevertheless, some people adopt an opposing view and tend to believe that space expedition are important to understand the galaxy, upright for science and economic problems. However, this activity entails tremendous cost which will burden on countries budget. As an illustration, extensive research has shown not just financial investment but also assigning million of people in the construction of spacecraft cannot guarantee success. Thus, it is correct to presume the preconceived notion of space funding to be less prioritized over other issues.
From what has been discussed above, it can be concluded that world has many issues which needs attention and there is further room for progress in determining the way to give funds proportionally.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Use simply: 'a million'.
Suggestion: a million
...financial investment but also assigning million of people in the construction of spacec...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, if, nevertheless, so, thus, whereas, for instance, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.5418719212 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 6.10837438424 131% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 8.36945812808 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 5.94088669951 135% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 20.9802955665 48% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 31.9359605911 100% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 5.75862068966 278% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1563.0 1207.87684729 129% => OK
No of words: 283.0 242.827586207 117% => OK
Chars per words: 5.52296819788 5.00649968141 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10153676581 3.92707691288 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82244355413 2.71678728327 104% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 139.433497537 131% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.643109540636 0.580463131201 111% => OK
syllable_count: 474.3 379.143842365 125% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.5024630542 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 79.3545241046 50.4703680194 157% => OK
Chars per sentence: 142.090909091 104.977214359 135% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.7272727273 20.9669160288 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.72727272727 7.25397266985 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.12807881773 121% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 6.9802955665 43% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 2.75862068966 217% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.198717013179 0.242375264174 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0640943550589 0.0925447433944 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.055815795175 0.071462118173 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101958092898 0.151781067708 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0514728593442 0.0609392437508 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.4 12.6369458128 138% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 53.1260098522 71% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 10.9458128079 130% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.03 11.5310837438 130% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.12 8.32886699507 122% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 55.0591133005 171% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.94827586207 141% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.3980295567 115% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.5123152709 133% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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