Parents are responsible for the behavior of the children. To what extent do you agree or disagree.

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Parents are responsible for the behavior of the children. To what extent do you agree or disagree.

Upbringing of the children is the most debated topic nowadays. Some people believe that parents are solely responsible for the attitude of their children towards everything they face. I profoundly agree with this statement, and further in this essay I will provide examples to support this stance and provide a plausible conclusion.

The role of the parents in nurturing their child is very crucial. Young one’s are the future of every society and there is a need of huge amount of care and responsibility to be taken, which lies on the parents first and foremost. For example, research shows that if a parent does not like a food and denies eating that at the dining table, the child automatically develops a distaste for that food. Parents should act as role models to their child and should always keep in mind that whatever they do will directly have an impact on their children.

Furthermore, if the parents have a bad relationship between them and they show it in front of their children, it effects the mental health of their dear ones. Such situations will push the child into depression and anxiety, which will grow overtime and will ultimately effect the society at some time. A recent survey shows that, children who see violence at home are more likely to be involved in crimes later in their life. Thus, any verbal or physical clashes between the parents should be avoided in front of children.

To conclude, it can be derived from the above statements that behavior of the children is directly related to their parents, and special care is advocated in upbringing of the children.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 270, Rule ID: AFFECT_EFFECT[7]
Message: Did you mean 'affect'?
Suggestion: affect
... will grow overtime and will ultimately effect the society at some time. A recent surv...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, if, so, thus, for example

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.5418719212 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 6.10837438424 164% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 8.36945812808 143% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 5.94088669951 168% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 20.9802955665 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 35.0 31.9359605911 110% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 5.75862068966 35% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1336.0 1207.87684729 111% => OK
No of words: 273.0 242.827586207 112% => OK
Chars per words: 4.89377289377 5.00649968141 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06481385082 3.92707691288 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57548494018 2.71678728327 95% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 139.433497537 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.564102564103 0.580463131201 97% => OK
syllable_count: 412.2 379.143842365 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 3.65517241379 27% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.5024630542 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.411062498 50.4703680194 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.333333333 104.977214359 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.75 20.9669160288 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.75 7.25397266985 52% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 2.75862068966 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.214857251819 0.242375264174 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0800412345878 0.0925447433944 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0472912609903 0.071462118173 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.131205859723 0.151781067708 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0343701042991 0.0609392437508 56% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 12.6369458128 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 53.1260098522 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.9458128079 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.38 11.5310837438 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.83 8.32886699507 106% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 55.0591133005 129% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.94827586207 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.3980295567 104% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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