Parents are responsible for the behavior of the children. To what extent do you agree or disagree.
Parents are responsible for the behavior of the children. To what extent do you agree or disagree.
One of the most conspicuous trends of today’s world is that parental responsibilities play a vital role in a part of the behavior of the children. There is widespread worry that this will lead to a myriad of problems among parents and children. In my opinion, this apprehension is warranted and merits serious consideration.
There are many arguments in favor of my stance. The most preponderant one is that it plays an integral role in enhancing the cognitive skill of children. Not only these children grow with a good attitude, but also becomes in gaining a number of benefits such as good humanism, love, and attention, which is impossible if parents are not involved such kinds of controlling act. For example, children, who are not controlled under parents, may involve in violent acts. Needless to say, all these merits make children in good stead, as far as to sign of good behavior and under the guidance of parents is concerned.
Another pivotal aspect of this argument is that children become goal achievers and it helps their studies too. Besides, due to small changes in the children’s behavior, it can lead to a good lifestyle among them. Hence, it is clear why many are in favor of the importance of parents’ responsibilities to act for the behavior of the children.
In view of the arguments outlined above, one can conclude that the benefits of the behavior of the children, which are controlled by parents are indeed too great to ignore.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, hence, if, may, so, as to, for example, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 10.5418719212 142% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 6.10837438424 65% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 8.36945812808 84% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 5.94088669951 135% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 20.9802955665 91% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 31.9359605911 138% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.75862068966 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1328.0 1207.87684729 110% => OK
No of words: 266.0 242.827586207 110% => OK
Chars per words: 4.99248120301 5.00649968141 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03850299372 3.92707691288 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96967020894 2.71678728327 109% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 139.433497537 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.53007518797 0.580463131201 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 407.7 379.143842365 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6551724138 111% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.5024630542 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.6246032458 50.4703680194 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.8571428571 104.977214359 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0 20.9669160288 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.85714285714 7.25397266985 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.12807881773 121% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 2.75862068966 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.420426720326 0.242375264174 173% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.164904754289 0.0925447433944 178% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.182753416608 0.071462118173 256% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.330685660763 0.151781067708 218% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.336138790838 0.0609392437508 552% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 12.6369458128 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 53.1260098522 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.9458128079 87% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.66 11.5310837438 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.2 8.32886699507 98% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 55.0591133005 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.94827586207 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.3980295567 92% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 75.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 67.5 Out of 90
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