'The pen is mightier than the sword.' Change can be implemented through persuasive argument or through force. Which is most effective? Support your point of view with details from your own experience, observation or reading.
There is a saying that "The pen is mightier than the sword." This means that change can be made through persuasive argument rather than using force. This essay will discuss why not sword, but pen is a more superior tool to bring change in the society by providing some examples.
The sword can bring swift change. By using sword or force, justice can be easily achieved, but it will involve the killing and destruction of people. Massacre in Syria, for instance, is a example of shaping the government through the way of killing and spreading terrorism, which has resulted in great loss to the both people and society. And then also no changes have been established. Hence, we can say that change through sword can be rapid but not in favor of society.
On the other hand, pen is indeed a more powerful tool to shape anything but it is slow. Evidently, we can see that the changes made by the persuasive arguments gone long way without causing any devastation to people or society. Writers, reporters, for example, present their viewpoints against any evil in the society through their pens and persuasive voice or discussion. Moreover, it does not harm the system adversely, although it is bit slow.
This essay discussed how sword can bring the rapid changes with greater loss, but pen can make ever lasting changes with no violence. In my opinion, pen is a great way to bring changes in the society with complete peace and without any loss to the humankind.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, moreover, so, then, for example, for instance, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.5418719212 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 6.10837438424 164% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 8.36945812808 167% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 5.94088669951 84% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 20.9802955665 76% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 31.9359605911 97% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.75862068966 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1219.0 1207.87684729 101% => OK
No of words: 255.0 242.827586207 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.78039215686 5.00649968141 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99608801488 3.92707691288 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5040559179 2.71678728327 92% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 139.433497537 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.529411764706 0.580463131201 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 366.3 379.143842365 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.57093596059 89% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 4.6157635468 130% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.931034482759 430% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.5024630542 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.8493991313 50.4703680194 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.7692307692 104.977214359 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6153846154 20.9669160288 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.76923076923 7.25397266985 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 2.75862068966 290% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.305162238105 0.242375264174 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.107887625155 0.0925447433944 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.107351582526 0.071462118173 150% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.195421581781 0.151781067708 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0889917389193 0.0609392437508 146% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 12.6369458128 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 53.1260098522 130% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 10.9458128079 76% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.44 11.5310837438 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.74 8.32886699507 93% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 55.0591133005 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.94827586207 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.3980295567 92% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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