People work because they need money to live. What are some other reasons that people work? Discuss one or more of these reasons. Use specific examples and details to support your answer.
The importance of people work because they need money to live and other reason that people work which was always debatable has now become more controversial with many people claiming that it is beneficial while others reject this notion. The substantial influnce of this trend has sparked the controversy over the potential impect in recent yaers. In my opinion, the latter proposition appears to be more rational This essay will further elaborate my views for favouring the positive impact of this trend and thus will lead a logical conclusion.
There are myriad of reasons which will further elaborate this argument but the most preponderant one stems from the fact that work because they complete daily needs and faimely bright future. For example, international student go to abroad for their bright future.Needless to say, all these merits stand in a good stead.
Elaborating my viewpoint, there are some more merits but one of the crucial is that one of the biggest reason some many people are go to work for overtime and gain some money for a complete thir dreams.
To conclusion, according to the arguments aforementioned above one can reach to a conclusion that the benefits people work because complete there needs to live money are indeed too dire to ignore.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, so, thus, while, for example, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 10.5418719212 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 8.36945812808 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 5.94088669951 118% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 20.9802955665 86% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 31.9359605911 72% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 5.75862068966 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1074.0 1207.87684729 89% => OK
No of words: 211.0 242.827586207 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.09004739336 5.00649968141 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81127787577 3.92707691288 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6635998702 2.71678728327 98% => OK
Unique words: 121.0 139.433497537 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.57345971564 0.580463131201 99% => OK
syllable_count: 337.5 379.143842365 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 4.6157635468 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 12.6551724138 55% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 20.5024630542 146% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 41.7739299622 50.4703680194 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 153.428571429 104.977214359 146% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.1428571429 20.9669160288 144% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.85714285714 7.25397266985 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.33497536946 56% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.341890132887 0.242375264174 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.153124968547 0.0925447433944 165% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.137783909318 0.071462118173 193% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.210587036142 0.151781067708 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0499186280196 0.0609392437508 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.6 12.6369458128 139% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.03 53.1260098522 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 10.9458128079 137% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.83 11.5310837438 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.02 8.32886699507 108% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 55.0591133005 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.94827586207 146% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.3980295567 135% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.5123152709 143% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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