People work because they need money to live. What are some other reasons that people work? Discuss one or more of these reasons. Use specific examples and details to support your answer.
The importance of people work because they need money to live and some other reasons that people work which was always debatable has now become more controversial with plethora people claiming that it is beneficial while others reject this notion. The substantial influence of this trend has sparked the controversy over the potential impact in recent years. In my opinion, the former proposition appears to be more rational. This essay will further elaborate my views for favouring the positive impact of this trend and thus will lead to a logical conclusion.
There are myriad reasons which will further elaborate this argument but the most preponderant are stems from the fact that some masses work because they complete their daily needs and money to live. But much people work some other reasons like, after marriage her responsibility increased and own hands their children future.So it is main cause people work for other reasons. For instance, some international students study in overseas for their bright future.
Elaborating my viewpoint, there are some more reasons but surmount effect is that myriad masses much work for complete their engrossment and better future. For instance, much people hardly work buy some luxurious things. like, cars and electronic gadgets so on.
According to the arguments aforementioned above, one can reach to a conclusion that the benefit of orphans age in which age they easily and comfortably spend the period are indeed too great.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Use 'many' with countable nouns.
Suggestion: many
...heir daily needs and money to live. But much people work some other reasons like, af...
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Suggestion: So
...sed and own hands their children future.So it is main cause people work for other ...
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Suggestion: many
...ssment and better future. For instance, much people hardly work buy some luxurious t...
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Suggestion: Like
... hardly work buy some luxurious things. like, cars and electronic gadgets so on. ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...nclusion that the benefit of orphans age in which age they easily and comfortably...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, so, thus, while, as for, for instance, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.5418719212 85% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 8.36945812808 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 5.94088669951 135% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 20.9802955665 110% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 31.9359605911 66% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.75862068966 122% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1256.0 1207.87684729 104% => OK
No of words: 237.0 242.827586207 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.29957805907 5.00649968141 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.92362132708 3.92707691288 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61054958028 2.71678728327 96% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 139.433497537 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.57805907173 0.580463131201 100% => OK
syllable_count: 386.1 379.143842365 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 4.6157635468 22% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.5024630542 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 63.0639187748 50.4703680194 125% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.181818182 104.977214359 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5454545455 20.9669160288 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.18181818182 7.25397266985 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.33497536946 94% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.338427851212 0.242375264174 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.119147555673 0.0925447433944 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.13169998407 0.071462118173 184% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.190086251574 0.151781067708 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0970961139712 0.0609392437508 159% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 12.6369458128 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 53.1260098522 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.9458128079 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.46 11.5310837438 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.68 8.32886699507 104% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 55.0591133005 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.94827586207 116% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.3980295567 100% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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