Personal development is the base for professional development and advancing in one’s career. To what extent do you agree?
It is indubitable that the recent phenomenon of personal growth is widely debated among the professionals with many people claiming that personal development is not a pre-requisite to one’s professional career. However, I strongly believe that living a healthy lifestyle and keeping a positive mindset has a vital role to play in the professional growth of a person. This essay will further elaborate on both sides and thus, will lead to a logical conclusion.
To begin with, there are various potential benefits of personal growth in one’s profession. Firstly. it is indispensable to have a positive outlook and to lead a healthy life than being sedentary. Moreover, resorting to current grooming styles and keeping one informed and updated to latest happenings makes one confident and marketable in the long run. Last but not the least, it is essential to be technically sound and adaptable to the working environments which eventually shows your logical reasoning and problem-solving capabilities. All this contributes to the personal growth which are necessary to survive in today’s cut-throat competitions.
However, people who argue on professionalism balance their arguments on those who are unable to keep up with the pace of modern lifestyles. Moreover, these people remain confused, distracted and could not make decisions regarding their personal and work lives. For instance, people who are receptive to changes feel isolated, devastated and suffer early burnout in their careers. This kind of people is not suited to current environments.
In view of the arguments mentioned above, it is concluded that personal growth is the only way to have a successful professional stature and can lead one to his accomplishments.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, look, moreover, regarding, so, thus, for instance, kind of, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 10.5418719212 133% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 6.10837438424 65% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 8.36945812808 155% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 5.94088669951 151% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 20.9802955665 91% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 31.9359605911 122% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 5.75862068966 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1482.0 1207.87684729 123% => OK
No of words: 271.0 242.827586207 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.46863468635 5.00649968141 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05734859645 3.92707691288 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.22037281245 2.71678728327 119% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 139.433497537 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.583025830258 0.580463131201 100% => OK
syllable_count: 467.1 379.143842365 123% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 4.6157635468 173% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.5024630542 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.2857285646 50.4703680194 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.0 104.977214359 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8461538462 20.9669160288 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.23076923077 7.25397266985 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.201898103774 0.242375264174 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0670340145945 0.0925447433944 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0822504910207 0.071462118173 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118791813367 0.151781067708 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.062036227855 0.0609392437508 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 12.6369458128 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 53.1260098522 80% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.9458128079 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.45 11.5310837438 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.76 8.32886699507 117% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 55.0591133005 160% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.94827586207 121% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.3980295567 96% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 72.5 Out of 90
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