Personal development is the base for professional development and advancing in one's career. To what extent do yo agree or disagree?
Personal grooming is an indespensable part of each and everyone life to grow in career. Where a significant number of people believe that personality development is the base of professional development, others not believe like that. I strongly agreed with the positive aspect of the personality development and will elucidate further to support my points with the required arguments and examples.
There are myriads of examples available which represents that to pursue in the professional career one must invest in the self development. The preponderant one is globalization. Globalization have created a platform where different cultures and the countries perform trades without any restrictions. As a result, to augment sales of companies, talented man-power is always required. Moreover, if a person is well versed in confabulation and in dealing with the cross culture society, it will not only increases the sale but also help to win the faith of the end customers.
Another pivotal aspect of the personality development is that it enables person to conquer negative situation with positive mind. It helps in booming the decision-making power, planning and to work beyond the horizons. It asserts human being to judge between good and bad, nevertheless create a health relationship between success and goal. However, if a person is having niche skills as a profession, a mirror-cracking personality adds cherry on the cake.
In conclusion, on the basis of above-mentioned points, one can conclude that in today's world if a person wants to be successful, he must need to invest their personal development skills which enable him to perform multiple jobs at same time.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 503, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[3]
Message: The verb 'will' requires base form of the verb: 'increase'
Suggestion: increase
...cross culture society, it will not only increases the sale but also help to win the faith...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, moreover, nevertheless, so, well, in conclusion, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.5418719212 95% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 6.10837438424 98% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 8.36945812808 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 5.94088669951 151% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 20.9802955665 67% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 31.9359605911 128% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 5.75862068966 191% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1418.0 1207.87684729 117% => OK
No of words: 264.0 242.827586207 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.37121212121 5.00649968141 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03089032464 3.92707691288 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.21925130605 2.71678728327 118% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 139.433497537 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.621212121212 0.580463131201 107% => OK
syllable_count: 445.5 379.143842365 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.71428571429 175% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.5024630542 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.4999850577 50.4703680194 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.076923077 104.977214359 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3076923077 20.9669160288 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.46153846154 7.25397266985 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 2.91625615764 137% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.235702688164 0.242375264174 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0746437506749 0.0925447433944 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0600997252076 0.071462118173 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.138053396263 0.151781067708 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0537583562938 0.0609392437508 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 12.6369458128 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 53.1260098522 80% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.9458128079 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.87 11.5310837438 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.29 8.32886699507 112% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 55.0591133005 142% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.94827586207 111% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.3980295567 96% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.5123152709 133% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 88.8888888889 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 80.0 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.