Polygamy has increased widely in recent year. What solutions can you brought forward to decrease this issue?
The issue of Polygamy , which was always debatable, but has now become more controversial. Polygamy has increased in recent year and it should be reduced. This will explore how it can be overcome in the upcoming paragraphs before coming particular conclusion.
To begin with, government play crucial role to spread information among the people . Government should punished the people who marry more than one person . The government should organize awareness to spread among campaigns and aware most country people to decreased polygamy and awareness campaign people get hesitate it.
In addition, government authority should pass restricted role in polygamy so that people hesitate marry in one to another people and government should apply very heavy fine in this issues. Furthermore, government should provide education every person because people are aware reduce polygamy. Government should look after these matters.
To recapitulate, as aforementioned, every coin has two sides, I think this solution is best for decreasing or stop the polygamy and people should follow them with the help of government sickness and government apply very heavy fine these person who get it.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, look, so, i think, in addition, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 10.5418719212 47% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 6.10837438424 164% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 8.36945812808 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 5.94088669951 67% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 20.9802955665 57% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 31.9359605911 63% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 5.75862068966 226% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1000.0 1207.87684729 83% => OK
No of words: 181.0 242.827586207 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.52486187845 5.00649968141 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.66791821706 3.92707691288 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80510606534 2.71678728327 103% => OK
Unique words: 109.0 139.433497537 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.602209944751 0.580463131201 104% => OK
syllable_count: 321.3 379.143842365 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.57093596059 115% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6551724138 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.5024630542 88% => OK
Sentence length SD: 63.048314807 50.4703680194 125% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.0 104.977214359 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1 20.9669160288 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.3 7.25397266985 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.33497536946 187% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 6.9802955665 57% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 2.75862068966 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.132974315054 0.242375264174 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0644231439777 0.0925447433944 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0761117115738 0.071462118173 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100409368019 0.151781067708 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.080773516225 0.0609392437508 133% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 12.6369458128 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.28 53.1260098522 68% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.9458128079 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.44 11.5310837438 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.11 8.32886699507 97% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 55.0591133005 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.94827586207 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.3980295567 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 200 words wanted.
Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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