Poverty is a major issue worldwide. Many charities exist to help collect monetary donations. Who should decide what the donations are spent on? The people in need or the charitable organisations? Support your point of view from your own experience, observations or reading
The role of charitable organizations in spending the donations is widely debated, with many people claiming that they should not decide where the donations are spent on. However, in my view, the impoverished people should have the ultimate say in this decision. This essay will further elaborate on both sides and thus, will lead to a logical conclusion.
To begin with, there are various reasons why authorities and charitable organizations should not be involved in decision-making where money is concerned. The most conspicuous one is that they often misuse the people’s fund by channelling them into less important activities or most of the times fill their pockets. Moreover, the purpose of the donations deviates and it is the poor people who ultimately suffer. Thus, these corrupt organizations undoubtedly do not value the donations.
On contrary, another perspective that the poor people should decide how and where to spend the money has a potential influence. These needy people are the real sufferers of the hardships and understand the value of money. Furthermore, they are the better ones who can decide where they want to spend the money. Hence, the chances of misusing the funds by these people in need are very less and therefore, will use them more appropriately and wisely.
This essay discussed why charitable organizations are not the better authority to take the decision concerning the donations, but the poor people should themselves decide where they want to use the money as they are the ones who understand the real value of money and will make a wise decision.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, hence, however, moreover, so, therefore, thus, in my view, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.5418719212 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 6.10837438424 180% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 8.36945812808 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 5.94088669951 185% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 20.9802955665 100% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 31.9359605911 85% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 5.75862068966 17% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1339.0 1207.87684729 111% => OK
No of words: 260.0 242.827586207 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.15 5.00649968141 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01553427287 3.92707691288 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87382340215 2.71678728327 106% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 139.433497537 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.511538461538 0.580463131201 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 425.7 379.143842365 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 5.0 1.56157635468 320% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.5024630542 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.2501192178 50.4703680194 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.583333333 104.977214359 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6666666667 20.9669160288 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.5 7.25397266985 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 2.75862068966 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.157959680804 0.242375264174 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0658204456347 0.0925447433944 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0495077686989 0.071462118173 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.109954863011 0.151781067708 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.029640662484 0.0609392437508 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 12.6369458128 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 53.1260098522 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.9458128079 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.59 11.5310837438 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.26 8.32886699507 99% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 55.0591133005 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.94827586207 121% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.3980295567 100% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 75.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 67.5 Out of 90
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