rural areas and urban areas

Essay topics:

rural areas and urban areas

The importance of rural areas and urban areas which was always debatable has now become more controversial with many people claiming that it beneficial while others reject this notion. The substantial influence of this trend has sparked the controversial over the potential impact in recent years. In my opinion, the former proposition appears to be more rational. This essay will further elaborate my views for favoring the positive impact of this trend and thus will lead to a logical conclusion.
There are myriad of reasons which will further elaborate this argument but most preponderant one stems from the fact that mostly people leave to a urban areas because there are many provides of things. Consequently, people in rural areas are moving to urban areas for job and study opportunities. Another pivotal aspect of this trend rural areas is the best because neighbor stay together. Needless to say, all these merits stand in a good stead.
Elaborating my viewpoint there are some more merits but one of the crucial effects is that mostly people stay to urban areas because available the most facilities for example hospital facilities education facilities and playing the games and provide to garden for elder people. Hence, it is apparent why many are against of this trend.
According to the arguments aforementioned above one can reach to a conclusion that the benefits of people in rural areas are moving to urban areas for job and study opportunities are indeed to a great to ignore.

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Average: 7.7 (1 vote)
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 146, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...om the fact that mostly people leave to a urban areas because there are many prov...
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Line 2, column 154, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'area'?
Suggestion: area
...act that mostly people leave to a urban areas because there are many provides of thin...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, hence, so, thus, while, as for, for example, in my opinion

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.5418719212 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 6.10837438424 65% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 8.36945812808 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 5.94088669951 101% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 20.9802955665 81% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 31.9359605911 100% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.75862068966 87% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1255.0 1207.87684729 104% => OK
No of words: 247.0 242.827586207 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.08097165992 5.00649968141 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96437052324 3.92707691288 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67800835722 2.71678728327 99% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 139.433497537 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.526315789474 0.580463131201 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 406.8 379.143842365 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.5024630542 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 69.9646900318 50.4703680194 139% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.090909091 104.977214359 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4545454545 20.9669160288 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 7.25397266985 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.395231271434 0.242375264174 163% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.167052630356 0.0925447433944 181% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.186034087841 0.071462118173 260% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.27941940621 0.151781067708 184% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.128673775135 0.0609392437508 211% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 12.6369458128 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 53.1260098522 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.9458128079 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.48 11.5310837438 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.56 8.32886699507 103% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 55.0591133005 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.94827586207 116% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.3980295567 104% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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