Should animals be kept in zoos or are they better living in their natural habitat?
The importance of zoos which has always contentious has now become more controversial with many people clamming that it is beneficial while others reject this notion. The sustainable influence of zoos has sparked the controversy over the potential impact of this trend in this year. In my opinion, the proposition appears to be rational and this essay will further elaborate my reasons for favoring the positive effects of this trend and thus will lead to be a logical conclusion.
There are myriad reasons which will further explains this argument, but the most preponderant one stems from the fact that save environment, because animals can destroy plants and also harmful to humans. Moreover, nowadays, zoos societies are providing all facilities to animals as compared to last decade.
Furthermore, Animal killing is impossible inside the zoo. For example, people cannot kill them to satisfy their selfish needs. Also, one animal always feel good when they near with other animals because they feel independence. As a result, it has necessity animals should be kept in zoos.
According to the arguments aforementioned above, one can reach a conclusion that zoos has first home for animals thus they kept in zoos without any regulations. Hence, the conditions of the zoos should be upgraded to such an extent that animals feel happy, comfortable and as close to their natural habitat as possible.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, hence, moreover, so, thus, while, for example, as a result, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 10.5418719212 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 6.10837438424 131% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 8.36945812808 60% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 5.94088669951 118% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 20.9802955665 95% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 31.9359605911 81% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.75862068966 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1185.0 1207.87684729 98% => OK
No of words: 226.0 242.827586207 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.24336283186 5.00649968141 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.87727950738 3.92707691288 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74552084691 2.71678728327 101% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 139.433497537 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.615044247788 0.580463131201 106% => OK
syllable_count: 366.3 379.143842365 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 4.6157635468 22% => OK
Article: 4.0 1.56157635468 256% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.5024630542 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.9241860737 50.4703680194 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.727272727 104.977214359 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5454545455 20.9669160288 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.45454545455 7.25397266985 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 6.9802955665 57% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 2.75862068966 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.341907517898 0.242375264174 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.131555176679 0.0925447433944 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.102692495688 0.071462118173 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.212406358099 0.151781067708 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.140491626714 0.0609392437508 231% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 12.6369458128 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 53.1260098522 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.9458128079 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.11 11.5310837438 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.1 8.32886699507 109% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 55.0591133005 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.94827586207 146% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.3980295567 96% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.5123152709 95% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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