Sex education refer to education of their attraction towards opposite sex, feeling, about reproductive parts, etc. and it is very essential in our life. I am totally agreeing with the statement that “children should be taught about sex education at school”. I will explain my reasons in this essay.
Firstly, it is most necessary to consider that due to lack of sex education many youngsters and children are being abused daily. Harassment, rape is the major example of assault. Sex education provide right information from right person or right teachers. They will learn the human sexual anatomy and its relation with their growth and development. If they could have understood this, then they could avoid them self from sexual contract and transferable diseases.
In other hand, sex education for children is quite difficult to understood in their age. So I also believe that the basic lesson like how to keep away from bad people, how they intend you to do so, how to protect themselves, etc. can protect them from sexual abuse but as they grow in to teenage the lesson must necessary to teach in detail because it is the age where the reproductive parts starts growing. If the children will be taught in detail than they will pretend to do practically how is it about because they are not grown enough.
In conclusion, the syllabus should be made in this way which can help children to understood but the sex education is very necessary to everyone till you get old.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
...and it is very essential in our life. I am totally agreeing with the statement that 'children ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, so, then, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 10.5418719212 123% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 6.10837438424 180% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 8.36945812808 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 5.94088669951 84% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 20.9802955665 148% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 31.9359605911 116% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 5.75862068966 208% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1234.0 1207.87684729 102% => OK
No of words: 252.0 242.827586207 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.89682539683 5.00649968141 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98428260373 3.92707691288 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67217637535 2.71678728327 98% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 139.433497537 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.56746031746 0.580463131201 98% => OK
syllable_count: 376.2 379.143842365 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6551724138 111% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.5024630542 88% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.798349738 50.4703680194 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.1428571429 104.977214359 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0 20.9669160288 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.85714285714 7.25397266985 53% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 2.75862068966 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.381328179056 0.242375264174 157% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.122365297346 0.0925447433944 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.147216225005 0.071462118173 206% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.252955908739 0.151781067708 167% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.121959541718 0.0609392437508 200% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 12.6369458128 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 53.1260098522 116% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.9458128079 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.84 11.5310837438 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.6 8.32886699507 91% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 55.0591133005 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.94827586207 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.3980295567 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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