Some developed countries have spent billions of dollars on space research. Some people consider this to be an irresponsible attitude since millions of people on Earth are suffering from hunger. What is your opinion?
One of the most conspicuous trends of today’s world is the colossal upsurge in the space research by the developed countries. Though it can be agreed that space exploration has many advantages like getting knowledge of our galaxy and other planets. However, others hold the different view since many people on the Earth are dying out of hunger every year. However, this essay will discuss the advantages of space research and exploration.
There are myriads of argument in favour of my stance, but the most preponderant one is that it allows people to know about the universe. Undoubtedly, space exploration has answered the question whether the Earth is round or not and proved that Earth does revolve around the sun. However, it does much more than that: it gives people more inside about the universe and provides the information about the world they live in. It helps them to realise that their problems are not that debilitating in the grand scheme of things while reminding them of how fortunate they are to be part of the vast and majestic universe.
Another pivotal aspect of this argument is that it paves the way for the advanced technology. Scientists are always developing new technologies for space research programs, but this innovations aren’t just useful for astronauts and space missions but can be used by industries to make new products and gadgets. These include GPS systems, Teflon-coated fibreglass and cancer test imaging. Also, a recent report published in the New York Times has revealed that space missions are creating numerous job opportunities as well.
Given the above discussion, it can be concluded that the space research is essential for the development of the human race, but the hunger problem of underdeveloped countries cannot be ignored as well. The experts need to strike a balance between both and come up with a viable solution.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 182, Rule ID: WHETHER[5]
Message: Can you shorten this phrase to just 'whether', or rephrase the sentence to avoid "the question"?
Suggestion: whether
...ubtedly, space exploration has answered the question whether the Earth is round or not and proved th...
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Line 5, column 178, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...logies for space research programs, but this innovations aren't just useful for...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, well, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 10.5418719212 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 6.10837438424 98% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 8.36945812808 167% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 5.94088669951 151% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 20.9802955665 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 31.9359605911 119% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 5.75862068966 174% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1582.0 1207.87684729 131% => OK
No of words: 310.0 242.827586207 128% => OK
Chars per words: 5.10322580645 5.00649968141 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19604776685 3.92707691288 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75736833319 2.71678728327 101% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 139.433497537 129% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.58064516129 0.580463131201 100% => OK
syllable_count: 491.4 379.143842365 130% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.931034482759 322% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 3.65517241379 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6551724138 111% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.5024630542 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.718020382 50.4703680194 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.0 104.977214359 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1428571429 20.9669160288 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.78571428571 7.25397266985 38% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 2.75862068966 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.20408387638 0.242375264174 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0622752120683 0.0925447433944 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0471635208871 0.071462118173 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.117123790848 0.151781067708 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0361465225311 0.0609392437508 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 12.6369458128 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 53.1260098522 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.9458128079 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.3 11.5310837438 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.01 8.32886699507 108% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 55.0591133005 153% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.94827586207 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.3980295567 104% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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