Some developed countries have spent billions of dollars on space research. Some people consider this to be an irresponsible attitude since millions of people on Earth are suffering from hunger. What is your opinion
Our infatuation with the space is increasing day by day as different countries are spending billions for the purpose of space research. But topic of space research always creates debate among people; some people believe that spending billions of money space research is irresponsible when millions of people are dying of hunger whereas other people think otherwise. This essay will discuss why it is good thing to spend money on space research.
To begin with, we known very little about our universe, therefore, it is important to investment money on space project. Continuous space exploration would be helpful to find out about our origin and to answer the question of existence of extraterrestrial life. For example, it would have been impossible to known that our solar system was a result of big bang; if we had not studied about space. Therefore, space research is crucial to mankind to understand the mystery of universe and how it affect our planet and people residing on it.
Apart for that, countries which spend money on space project are developed countries and almost every people of those countries are living comfortable life. They do not bear onus to eliminate world hunger as there are many non- profit organization like UN, UNICEF, etc working for the betterment of humanity. For instance, UNICEF gets funds from different developed countries to sustain and perform at the highest level. Ergo, it would be ignorant to blame countries that invest in space research for the world hunger.
To recapitulate, this essay talked about the importance of space exploration and why countries that spend billions of dollars to study space are not responsible for world hunger.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, therefore, whereas, for example, for instance, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 10.5418719212 142% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 6.10837438424 65% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 8.36945812808 84% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 5.94088669951 118% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 20.9802955665 105% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 31.9359605911 135% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 5.75862068966 174% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1420.0 1207.87684729 118% => OK
No of words: 276.0 242.827586207 114% => OK
Chars per words: 5.14492753623 5.00649968141 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07593519647 3.92707691288 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66998257922 2.71678728327 98% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 139.433497537 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.557971014493 0.580463131201 96% => OK
syllable_count: 441.0 379.143842365 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 4.6157635468 173% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.5024630542 112% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.3381693296 50.4703680194 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.333333333 104.977214359 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0 20.9669160288 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.16666666667 7.25397266985 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.33497536946 56% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.290375855261 0.242375264174 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.110399756264 0.0925447433944 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0801785307939 0.071462118173 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.180838136734 0.151781067708 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0733135446785 0.0609392437508 120% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 12.6369458128 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 53.1260098522 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.9458128079 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.83 11.5310837438 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.61 8.32886699507 103% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 55.0591133005 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.94827586207 106% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.3980295567 108% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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