Some organizations integrate employees in decision making process of their goods and services. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this

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Some organizations integrate employees in decision making process of their goods and services. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this

In recent scenario, people's are so intelligent in their field and they always focus on their work. Some people reckon that some organizations integrate employees in decision making process of their good services. There are ample of pros and cons of this and i would life to discuss in following paragraph.
Highlighting it's advantages, the primary one which is worth mentioning that if employees take part into making decision in particular field then work may complete with less burden or stress. Above all this, one more advantage which add to popularity of company that is due to employees always are the backbone of every company because all the work done trough them.
Shifting towards it's darker aspects, it can no be denied that, some time employees can damage the popularity of company by their decision and it can turn into wrong way and due to this company can lost their name or fame for example, if there is any problem with the owner of the company then employees may always damage the name of the company.
Summarizing the whole content i reiterate my opinion that though it carry advantages but it has also various disadvantages so as result we should always aware from the good and bad employees.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, so, then, for example, in particular

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 10.5418719212 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 6.10837438424 131% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 8.36945812808 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 5.94088669951 118% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 20.9802955665 119% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 31.9359605911 78% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 5.75862068966 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1008.0 1207.87684729 83% => OK
No of words: 208.0 242.827586207 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.84615384615 5.00649968141 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79765784423 3.92707691288 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55050682398 2.71678728327 94% => OK
Unique words: 126.0 139.433497537 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.605769230769 0.580463131201 104% => OK
syllable_count: 319.5 379.143842365 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 4.6157635468 22% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 12.6551724138 55% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.5024630542 141% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 81.3816907654 50.4703680194 161% => OK
Chars per sentence: 144.0 104.977214359 137% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.7142857143 20.9669160288 142% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 7.25397266985 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.33497536946 112% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 6.9802955665 43% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.376540761732 0.242375264174 155% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.172840890716 0.0925447433944 187% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.187777799705 0.071462118173 263% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.203012211418 0.151781067708 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.153333766457 0.0609392437508 252% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.3 12.6369458128 129% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.5 53.1260098522 95% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 10.9458128079 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.44 11.5310837438 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.34 8.32886699507 100% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 55.0591133005 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.94827586207 111% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.3980295567 131% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.5123152709 133% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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