Some people argue that experience is the best teacher. Life experiences can teach more effectively than books or formal school education. How far do you agree with this idea?
The importance of education, which was always debatable, has now become more controversial. The substantial influence of education in formal schools has sparked the controversy over the potential impact of this trend on society in recent years. it can be agreed that some people ague that experience is the best teacher, but others do not think in the same way. this essay will elaborate how emotional inteligence is not learned by studying books and how high technology depends on formal education and thus will lead to a logical conclusion.
At the outset, there are many reasons why life experience is the best teacher, but the most conspicuous one stems from the fact that emotional inteligence can only be learned with time and some troubles in life. As an illustration, a University of Adelaide study has shown that emotional inteligence is impossible to be taught by books or formal education in 90% of the time, requiring, though, experiences acquired from life. therefore, according to this point of view life experience is the best teacher.
Nevertheless, some people adopt an opposing view and tend to believe that books and formal school education is also significant as the best teacher as there are innumerable reasons for that but the most salient one is that high technology is not possible to acquire by life experience and, hence, some knowledge cannot be developed. For example, the DNA was dicovered by the usage of microscopes. therefore, books and formal education are better teachers in some situations.
From what has been discussed above, it can be concluded that the impact of life experience is prominent, although the way formal school education impacts should not be overlooked.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, look, nevertheless, so, therefore, thus, for example, in the same way
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 10.5418719212 199% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 6.10837438424 115% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 8.36945812808 131% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 5.94088669951 151% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 20.9802955665 62% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 31.9359605911 100% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 5.75862068966 313% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1438.0 1207.87684729 119% => OK
No of words: 279.0 242.827586207 115% => OK
Chars per words: 5.1541218638 5.00649968141 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08696624509 3.92707691288 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88957808156 2.71678728327 106% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 139.433497537 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.52688172043 0.580463131201 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 459.9 379.143842365 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 1.56157635468 256% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.5024630542 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 76.9214475352 50.4703680194 152% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.727272727 104.977214359 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.3636363636 20.9669160288 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.27272727273 7.25397266985 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.33497536946 75% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 6.9802955665 129% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.382918574677 0.242375264174 158% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.149534151965 0.0925447433944 162% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0848823557176 0.071462118173 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.23041710467 0.151781067708 152% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0615910001108 0.0609392437508 101% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 12.6369458128 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 53.1260098522 87% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 10.9458128079 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.89 11.5310837438 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.39 8.32886699507 101% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 55.0591133005 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.94827586207 121% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.3980295567 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 72.0 Out of 90
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