Some people argue that experience is the best teacher. Life experiences can teach more effectively than books or formal school education. How far do you agree with this idea? Support your opinion with reasons and/or your personal experience.
Recently, the idea of experiential leaning against the formal learning has caused an uproar in the education community. Some people agreed that learning through experience is the best teacher whereas others rejected this notion saying that formal education is best way to prepare a person for the life. This essay will discuss the positive sides of learning through experience and provides a conclusion.
To begin with, there are myriad reasons that stem to the fact that experience is the best teacher, but the most important one is the subjects including language, science and drama require students to learn from practical experiences. Although theories can be taught from books and exams, how to use the language, conduct an experiment and perform in front of audiences must be learn through practices. A recent survey on this issue discovered that those activities help majority of students better understand the theories and allow them to apply those skills learnt in daily life. Therefore, life experiences enhance knowledge from books or formal education.
Furthermore, this way of learning enables the students to experience the reality. The art of driving can be enjoyed only when we are behind the wheels and not when reading it in books. This is apparent why students has to opt to apply the lessons learned in their class room in their lives to face the reality.
In conclusion, this essay has discussed why it is important to learn through experience as few subjects demand practical knowledge to understand them and to face the reality of a job. In my opinion, class room teaching needs to intertwined with on field training so that students can reap the benefits of learning through experience.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 258, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[4]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'is the best'.
Suggestion: is the best
...his notion saying that formal education is best way to prepare a person for the life. T...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, if, so, therefore, whereas, as to, in conclusion, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.5418719212 104% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 8.36945812808 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 5.94088669951 135% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 20.9802955665 105% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 31.9359605911 135% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 5.75862068966 208% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1442.0 1207.87684729 119% => OK
No of words: 280.0 242.827586207 115% => OK
Chars per words: 5.15 5.00649968141 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09062348924 3.92707691288 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67608455984 2.71678728327 99% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 139.433497537 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.55 0.580463131201 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 428.4 379.143842365 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.5024630542 112% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.2373105715 50.4703680194 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.166666667 104.977214359 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.3333333333 20.9669160288 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 7.25397266985 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 2.75862068966 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 2.91625615764 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.254330946948 0.242375264174 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.09747597766 0.0925447433944 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0691713637095 0.071462118173 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.149707391127 0.151781067708 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0585723781129 0.0609392437508 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 12.6369458128 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 53.1260098522 107% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.9458128079 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.89 11.5310837438 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.61 8.32886699507 103% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 55.0591133005 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.94827586207 141% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.3980295567 108% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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