Some people argue that young people should concentrate on study or work. Some people think it is better to put energy in activities designed to broaden their experience, such as international travel and volunteering. Support with examples or cases.
In this contemporary world, there is a segment of society which hold opinion that young people should concentrate on study or work only where some has opposite opinion that its better to put energy in activities such as international travel and volunteering as these activities broaden experience. This contentious topic has been profoundly debated in several forums. I will discuss both the views meticulously and give my opinion from a bird's-eye stance.
Throwing light on first view, young age is learning age in which every person is student and he needs to learn for survive in this world. A student who focuses on study in early stage enjoy better life later without facing much problems. Moreover, work is more important than other activities because it is way to earn for daily needs. To illustrate, Money is important for survival and a person has to work to earn money and study is important to get good work.
Paradoxically, study is not good with only theoretical knowledge so person should do some other activities such as travelling to broaden his experience and enhance his knowledge. Furthermore, volunteering is a good method to learn about a subject as it give a good platform to look at a subject closely.
To summaries, although study and work are essential for young student , practicing activities such as travel and volunteering are good for experience the knowledge.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, if, look, moreover, so, as to, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.5418719212 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 6.10837438424 49% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 8.36945812808 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 5.94088669951 101% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 20.9802955665 67% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 31.9359605911 85% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.75862068966 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1175.0 1207.87684729 97% => OK
No of words: 230.0 242.827586207 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.10869565217 5.00649968141 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89432290496 3.92707691288 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89945709501 2.71678728327 107% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 139.433497537 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.565217391304 0.580463131201 97% => OK
syllable_count: 367.2 379.143842365 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6551724138 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.5024630542 112% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.907107831 50.4703680194 123% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.5 104.977214359 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0 20.9669160288 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.8 7.25397266985 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.33497536946 56% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.267213841362 0.242375264174 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0904188723224 0.0925447433944 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.121730867902 0.071462118173 170% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.156894241403 0.151781067708 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0817388964389 0.0609392437508 134% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 12.6369458128 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 53.1260098522 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.9458128079 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 11.5310837438 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.87 8.32886699507 94% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 55.0591133005 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.94827586207 141% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.3980295567 108% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.5123152709 133% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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