Some people believe that aim of higher education is to make people ready for employment. Give your opinion?
One of the most conspicuous trends of today would is causal upsurge some people believe that aim of higher education is make people ready for employment. There is a widespread worry that this will only lead to myriad of concern in one life. However, I do not entirely accept this and I will explain why in this essay.
There are number of arguments in favor of my stance. The most preponderate one is that I think this is right some people believe in that aim of higher education for became good person or ready for employment can not only contribute to education is very important because without education people have not success in own life or without education not make people ready for employment. It raises the standard of living. But also lead to numerous other benefits in various fields. Thanks to the wide range of advantage of offers, not only can one benefits more when it. Comes to being effective, but they can also enhance the productivity and quality the productivity and quality of their lives, with much ease, efficacy and convenience. Needless to say, these entire merits stand one is good stead, as far as augmenting their chances of prosperity and excellence is concerned.
Overall, education is very important to make ready for employment and raises standard living.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...right some people believe in that aim of higher education for became good person ...
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Suggestion:
...employment and raises standard living.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.5418719212 104% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 6.10837438424 98% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 8.36945812808 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 5.94088669951 84% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 20.9802955665 86% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 31.9359605911 88% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 5.75862068966 226% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1077.0 1207.87684729 89% => OK
No of words: 220.0 242.827586207 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.89545454545 5.00649968141 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.85128510684 3.92707691288 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60946703022 2.71678728327 96% => OK
Unique words: 117.0 139.433497537 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.531818181818 0.580463131201 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 352.8 379.143842365 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 3.65517241379 27% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.5024630542 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 79.0689624723 50.4703680194 157% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.9090909091 104.977214359 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 20.9669160288 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.18181818182 7.25397266985 44% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.12807881773 73% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 5.33497536946 56% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.382270525428 0.242375264174 158% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.112879840652 0.0925447433944 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.20386600731 0.071462118173 285% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.265309377559 0.151781067708 175% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0609325836309 0.0609392437508 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 12.6369458128 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 53.1260098522 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.9458128079 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.14 11.5310837438 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.64 8.32886699507 92% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 55.0591133005 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.94827586207 111% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.3980295567 96% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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