Some people believe that confidence wins bigger games that knowledge alone cannot. Also, that accumulating knowledge makes no sense until one has the confidence to put it to use.Is it true that knowledge will help one win a struggle only if it is put into

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Some people believe that confidence wins bigger games that knowledge alone cannot. Also, that accumulating knowledge makes no sense until one has the confidence to put it to use.

Is it true that knowledge will help one win a struggle only if it is put into practice with full confidence, or is it confidence without knowledge that is null and void?

Knowledge is always powerful when it is used in a manner that benefits its people and society. Accumulating the knowledge cannot gain anything to both an indivual and to the surroudings. This can be achieved only with the right confidence in making proper effort on it for the welfare of his environment with hard work. In this essay, some of the reasons and examples are explained in detail.

To start with, many of the inventions were acheived in the past due to the greater efforts by the scentists who primilarly worked on the concepts and theories which they learned in past. It is with their immense hardwork, a lot of changes happened in this scientific era regarding the space exploration apart from gaining knowledge on other planets.

Further, it is with the continous work, Edison discovered a light after rigorous work and successive failures. Even now, many new inventions and explorations have become possible through possible research and work on scientific theories.

In conclusion, it is always the attitude, work and will power makes an individual to discover on knowledge that always benefits its people around. Hence, simply accumulating the knowledge alone will not gain any people and the society.It is always the work and confidence along with the proper knowledge plays a great role.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, if, regarding, so, apart from, in conclusion, to start with

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.5418719212 85% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 6.10837438424 65% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 8.36945812808 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 5.94088669951 84% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 20.9802955665 76% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 31.9359605911 113% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.75862068966 69% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1102.0 1207.87684729 91% => OK
No of words: 215.0 242.827586207 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.12558139535 5.00649968141 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82921379641 3.92707691288 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75001352079 2.71678728327 101% => OK
Unique words: 128.0 139.433497537 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.595348837209 0.580463131201 103% => OK
syllable_count: 339.3 379.143842365 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6551724138 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.5024630542 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.2360317916 50.4703680194 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.2 104.977214359 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5 20.9669160288 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.6 7.25397266985 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.33497536946 56% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.184311175522 0.242375264174 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0796855089413 0.0925447433944 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0743879667293 0.071462118173 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112908069524 0.151781067708 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0960496921616 0.0609392437508 158% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 12.6369458128 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 53.1260098522 94% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.9458128079 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 11.5310837438 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.86 8.32886699507 106% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 55.0591133005 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.94827586207 106% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.3980295567 100% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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