Some people believe that confidence wins bigger games that knowledge alone cannot. Also, that accumulating knowledge makes no sense until one has the confidence to put it to use.Is it true that knowledge will help one win a struggle only if it is put into

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Some people believe that confidence wins bigger games that knowledge alone cannot. Also, that accumulating knowledge makes no sense until one has the confidence to put it to use.
Is it true that knowledge will help one win a struggle only if it is put into practice with full confidence, or is it confidence without knowledge that is null and void?

Knowledge and confidence always creates debate between people. Some find knowledge superior while other says otherwise. Some people even believe confidence and knowledge are like a two side of a coin meaning that a person cannot be successful with knowledge alone. They are also of the opinion that there is no point in accumulating knowledge if one cannot apply it with confidence. This essay will discuss why both confidence and knowledge is equally important a person’s endeavor of success.
Confidence is a trust that we have of ourselves as knowing we are good at something and the value we provide. Confidence has critical effect on perception of others about us. Without confidence, it is quite impossible to thrive and achieve success in any field, since most people questions the reliability of an insecure person. Whereas, knowledge is a state of knowing the facts, principle, information or having a skill, which is the result of education or experience. Knowledge is as important as confidence because a confident people without a knowledge is considered arrogant.
For example, imagine a person with the required knowledge starts a company of new mobile phones but when it comes to selling the product he cannot show the confidence like Steves Jobs showed on Iphones then it is safe to that customer will not also be skeptical about the phone.
This essay discussed the importance of both the confidence and knowledge. I my opinion, one should maintain balance between confidence and knowledge to be successful in life.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 546, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[2]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'knowledge'.
Suggestion: knowledge
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... not also be skeptical about the phone. This essay discussed the importance of b...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, then, whereas, while, for example

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 10.5418719212 142% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 6.10837438424 98% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 8.36945812808 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 5.94088669951 101% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 20.9802955665 91% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 31.9359605911 100% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 5.75862068966 295% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1293.0 1207.87684729 107% => OK
No of words: 250.0 242.827586207 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.172 5.00649968141 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97635364384 3.92707691288 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89420109875 2.71678728327 107% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 139.433497537 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.588 0.580463131201 101% => OK
syllable_count: 425.7 379.143842365 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.5024630542 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.7597339394 50.4703680194 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.4615384615 104.977214359 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2307692308 20.9669160288 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 7.25397266985 55% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 6.9802955665 172% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 2.75862068966 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.344595490778 0.242375264174 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.135248916132 0.0925447433944 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0855241794429 0.071462118173 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.208258028988 0.151781067708 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0956622414966 0.0609392437508 157% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 12.6369458128 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 53.1260098522 82% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.9458128079 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 11.5310837438 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.56 8.32886699507 103% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 55.0591133005 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.94827586207 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.3980295567 92% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.5123152709 124% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 72.0 Out of 90
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