Some people believe that exploring outer space is important because it expands human knowledge and might lead to discoveries that will benefit humanity in the future. Other people believe that space exploration is a waste of money that could be better spent solving immediate problems here on Earth.
Choose which position you most agree with and discuss why you chose that position. Support your point of view with details from your own experiences, observations or reading.
During the last fifty years, developed nations are competing fiercly to establish themselves as leaders of space exploration. While some people believe that space expeditions are highly beneficial to the development of mankind, others maintain that money spent on space missions is a waste of resources. This essay will discuss how the Earth is facing problems needing attention now and, therefore, the huge budgets spent on exploring outer space should be better spent on solving our immediate problems.
One of the major drawbacks of astronomical science is that it is very expensive. Even after spending millions of dollars spent on space missions, there is no noticable advances reported from any such missions. For example, even after seventy years after man had reached the surface of moon, we did not get any benefits out of that milestone. Under these circumstances, there is no reason to squander more and more money of exploring outer space.
Despite the evident wastage of resources, some people think that space explorations expand human knowledge and might lead to discoveries that will benefit humanity in the future. But, what they don't understand is that the pollution caused by thousands of artifical satellites on outer space is causing more harm to the Earth than good. For example, a recent study showed signs of possible collision between International Space Center and the Earth. So, it is high time we stop all our from space expeditions.
This essay discussed massive amounts of dollars wasted on space missions with no benefits and pollution problems caused by increasing number of satellites in space orbits. In my opinion, space exploration missions are a collosal waste of valuable money and solving immediate problems on the Earth should be given more priority over space expeditions.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 195, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
... humanity in the future. But, what they dont understand is that the pollution caused...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, therefore, while, for example, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 10.5418719212 133% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 8.36945812808 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 5.94088669951 118% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 20.9802955665 91% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 31.9359605911 135% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.75862068966 122% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1535.0 1207.87684729 127% => OK
No of words: 290.0 242.827586207 119% => OK
Chars per words: 5.29310344828 5.00649968141 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12666770723 3.92707691288 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71751486458 2.71678728327 100% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 139.433497537 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.593103448276 0.580463131201 102% => OK
syllable_count: 480.6 379.143842365 127% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.5024630542 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.9509737188 50.4703680194 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.076923077 104.977214359 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3076923077 20.9669160288 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.38461538462 7.25397266985 60% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 2.75862068966 254% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.385218806127 0.242375264174 159% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.1263943204 0.0925447433944 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.13476409011 0.071462118173 189% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.21992649811 0.151781067708 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0861760822557 0.0609392437508 141% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 12.6369458128 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 53.1260098522 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 10.9458128079 120% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.7 11.5310837438 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.25 8.32886699507 111% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 55.0591133005 151% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.94827586207 111% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.3980295567 104% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 85.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 76.5 Out of 90
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