Some people believe law changes human behavior. Do you agree/disagree?
These days, there is a controversial debate between members of society about the impacts of law on human’s behavior. There are a great number of people who interpret the impacts of law on our behavior as thoroughly constructive, while others hold an opponent’s view. I am inclined to believe that law causes some beneficial changes on human’s behavior, and such practices should be promoted.
There are several reasons why law fosters significant changes in the way an individual acts inside the society. First of all, it is argued that law plays a pivotal role in creating adroit person. This is attributed to the fact that regulations define what is allowed for an individual to do and what is forbidden; therefore people would know their boundaries and no one would violate everybody else’s defined rights. Such behavior will create a feeling of trust and confidence inside a community which would lead to general prosperity of a nation. Specifically, a research study conducted at Yale University found that living in cities with robust regulations enhance the people’s intellectual abilities so that they are able to make more concrete decisions.
In addition, it is claimed that the law has a considerable influence on the illegalities rate. This is to say that if a person knows that there might be a chance of being condemned to jail for doing a specific action, he would reconsider going down the path. Take driving for example, even the best skillful drivers are so conscious about the way they drive inside populated areas as they know that if violated the driving rules, there would be severe consequences for them.
In conclusion, the foregoing discussion propounded the view that the law changes the human behavior in an efficient way. It is expected from institutions to take cognizance of these facts and utilize the power of law in order to benefit their performance.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Consider replacing "in an efficient way" with adverb for "efficient"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, so, therefore, while, for example, in addition, in conclusion, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 10.5418719212 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 6.10837438424 131% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 8.36945812808 60% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 5.94088669951 202% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 26.0 20.9802955665 124% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 31.9359605911 125% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.75862068966 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1608.0 1207.87684729 133% => OK
No of words: 313.0 242.827586207 129% => OK
Chars per words: 5.13738019169 5.00649968141 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20616286096 3.92707691288 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9782561846 2.71678728327 110% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 139.433497537 134% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.597444089457 0.580463131201 103% => OK
syllable_count: 510.3 379.143842365 135% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 4.6157635468 173% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.325123152709 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.5024630542 117% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.7237410974 50.4703680194 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.692307692 104.977214359 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0769230769 20.9669160288 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 7.25397266985 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 2.75862068966 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.24887153829 0.242375264174 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0911080641824 0.0925447433944 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0807286797102 0.071462118173 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.154075705491 0.151781067708 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0943140068888 0.0609392437508 155% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 12.6369458128 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 53.1260098522 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.9458128079 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.83 11.5310837438 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.42 8.32886699507 113% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 55.0591133005 165% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.94827586207 116% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.3980295567 112% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.5123152709 124% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 85.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 77.0 Out of 90
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