Some people believe laws change human behavior. Do you agree with it?
Some people believe laws change human behavior has always been a debatable topic. Many states that rules are the only way to exercise control over the public to maintain peace. It is completely agreed that human way of behaving is governed by certain legislation. This essay would further elaborate the reasons how citizens respond according to policies set by the government with clear examples and thus lead to a plausible conclusion.
Firstly, strict laws make better countries and they respond to a situation in an orderly manner. Countries with stringent rules have the minimal crime rate. For example, in Singapore, smuggling drugs is considered as a criminal offense and local people has to face the death penalty, and therefore such activities hardly take place there. This example exemplifies that laws can alter people's behavior. Thus, there is an obvious link between laws and human behavior.
Secondly, in the UAE, kissing in public is a punishable act. Every citizen of this country is aware of this and it's hard to find anyone breaking the law and it is treated as the culture of the country. This example clearly explains that absence of law may create an unfavorable environment for the smooth functioning of the society.
According to the arguments outlined, one can reach out to a conclusion that there is a strong correlation between law and human behavior. It has been proven that many countries use the law as a major tool for peace and security.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Consider replacing "in an orderly manner" with adverb for "orderly"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
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Suggestion: break
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, may, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, as to, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.5418719212 104% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 6.10837438424 65% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 8.36945812808 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 5.94088669951 101% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 20.9802955665 76% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 31.9359605911 85% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.75862068966 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1234.0 1207.87684729 102% => OK
No of words: 245.0 242.827586207 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.03673469388 5.00649968141 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.95632099841 3.92707691288 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62709427376 2.71678728327 97% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 139.433497537 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.604081632653 0.580463131201 104% => OK
syllable_count: 388.8 379.143842365 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6551724138 111% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.5024630542 83% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.8490135079 50.4703680194 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.1428571429 104.977214359 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5 20.9669160288 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.85714285714 7.25397266985 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.33497536946 56% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.296874531437 0.242375264174 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101194962895 0.0925447433944 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.119211407738 0.071462118173 167% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.16545155175 0.151781067708 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0850744877475 0.0609392437508 140% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 12.6369458128 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 53.1260098522 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.9458128079 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.66 11.5310837438 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.12 8.32886699507 109% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 55.0591133005 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.94827586207 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.3980295567 85% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.5123152709 95% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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