There are great number of people who interpret the impacts of imposing laws as thoroughly constructive and positive, while there are a number of people who hold an opponent's views. i am inclined to law can positively shape people's perception and behavior.
There are several reason why imposing law is advantageous. first of all, it is argued that the fear of being penalized play a pivotal role in the way people behave. this my be attributed to the fact that as a result of possible penalties, people will be compelled to constantly remind themselves about the harmful consequences of breaking the law, so that they will become more responsible and accountable for their action. for example, the law of deformation is highly regarded as a fundamental protection of reputation for individual and organization.
In addition, it is claimed that law could enormously and constructively shape our perception. this is to say that legislation inevitably leads people to think the consequences of their action in a more detailed and focused way, therefore, it would specialize the characteristics in people, which might stimulate them to acquire positive outcome in their social and personal life. for example,malaysia has introduced high tax on alcoholic beverages which has consequently led to a significant decrease in consumption of these beverages. as this example illustrate, the benefit of imposing law is obvious, and our behavior and perception could be positively change.
In conclusion,the foregoing discussion propounds the view that law is essential for both individual and organization and can change human behavior. it is recommend that the authorities should introduce the regulated law in order to not restrict human right and freedom.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, first, if, so, therefore, while, for example, in addition, in conclusion, as a result, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 10.5418719212 142% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 6.10837438424 147% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 8.36945812808 143% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 5.94088669951 185% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 20.9802955665 119% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 31.9359605911 94% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 5.75862068966 191% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1481.0 1207.87684729 123% => OK
No of words: 275.0 242.827586207 113% => OK
Chars per words: 5.38545454545 5.00649968141 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07223819929 3.92707691288 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.24842288498 2.71678728327 120% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 139.433497537 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.585454545455 0.580463131201 101% => OK
syllable_count: 471.6 379.143842365 124% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 4.6157635468 152% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.71428571429 175% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.5024630542 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 65.8822602999 50.4703680194 131% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.416666667 104.977214359 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.9166666667 20.9669160288 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.83333333333 7.25397266985 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 19.0 5.33497536946 356% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.20179926073 0.242375264174 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.078551666954 0.0925447433944 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0532274629157 0.071462118173 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13342143575 0.151781067708 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0525152475417 0.0609392437508 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 12.6369458128 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 53.1260098522 77% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 10.9458128079 120% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.28 11.5310837438 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.67 8.32886699507 116% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 55.0591133005 156% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.94827586207 111% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.3980295567 104% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.