Some people believe laws change human behavior. Do you agree with it?
Today, law is there for everything. Law helps to regulate and keep check on everything. Law actually differentiate human from other animals, thus human is known as homo-sapiens. I believe law is the necessary evil and it does brings change to human behavior. In the essay, we will analyze how law inculcates obedience and responsibility in human behavior.
Firstly, law helps to restrict human behavior and motivates them to be obedient. Take traffic rules for instance, fines are levied for jumping red lights and traffic violation. This example clearly shows that the fear of penalty lead to obedience in human behavior, thus following traffic rules. It is obvious that law changes human behavior.
Moreover, law brings out responsibility in people. For example, rules of corporal punishment, ban on alcohol in public places, duty to environment. These rules clearly exemplifies how it develops responsibility in human behavior. As without these laws, human being would be more animalistic, thus law changes human behavior.
On analyzing the above reason, it is clear that law helps people being obedient and responsible. Therefore, it can be concluded that law has effect on human behavior. It is recommended that law should be enacted and human should follow those rules to make the world peaceful and friendly.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, first, firstly, if, moreover, so, therefore, thus, for example, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 7.0 186% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 1.00243902439 499% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 5.60731707317 321% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 23.0 33.7804878049 68% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1117.0 965.302439024 116% => OK
No of words: 210.0 196.424390244 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.31904761905 4.92477711251 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.80675409584 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89796628979 2.65546596893 109% => OK
Unique words: 116.0 106.607317073 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.552380952381 0.547539520022 101% => OK
syllable_count: 351.0 283.868780488 124% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.45097560976 117% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 1.53170731707 522% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Interrogative: 0.0 0.114634146341 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.33902439024 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 8.94146341463 179% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 22.4926829268 58% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 24.2653785 43.030603864 56% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 69.8125 112.824112599 62% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.125 22.9334400587 57% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 5.375 5.23603664747 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.13902439024 351% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.09268292683 195% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.327589105326 0.215688989381 152% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.138586683501 0.103423049105 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.103802207249 0.0843802449381 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.222732667437 0.15604864568 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0479351825361 0.0819641961636 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 13.2329268293 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 49.82 61.2550243902 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.69 11.4140731707 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.42 8.06136585366 104% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 40.7170731707 135% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 11.4329268293 52% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.9970731707 65% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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