1. Tobacco, mainly in the form of cigarettes is one of the most widely used drugs in the world. Over a billion adults legally smoke tobacco every day. The long-term health costs are high- for the smokers themselves, and for the wider community in terms of health care costs and lost productivity. Do Governments have a legitimate role in protecting citizens from the harmful effects of their own decisions to smoke, or are such decisions up to an individual?”
Today, smoking is widely spreading over the world. Smoking helps to describe a status nowadays, the teenagers thinks that it’s look cool to smoke. Smoking is the curse to the people. Cigarettes are the cause of cancer and many other diseases. Over a billion adults legally smoke every day. Thus, government should take initiative towards, this harmful effect and individual also think about this. Therefore I think government has a legitimate role over protecting the citizens from smoking. In this essay, we discuss action taken by government.
Firstly, governments should increases the cost of cigarettes and reduce the production of cigarettes. For example, when the cost of cigarettes increases it will redeem the production then people will buy less and smoke less. Thus, it will decrease the health cost and increase productivity. Therefore, government should take some measures towards smoking.
Secondly, government should make an age limit to smoke. For example, every shopkeeper should have seen id proof and give cigarettes to them. It helps to restrict teenagers to smoking. Thus, individual also should stop smoking which help to improve their health. Therefore, it’s also up too individual to take some decision over smoking.
In the conclusion, government should take effective measure to reduce smoking it’s also individual who have to take decision. Thus, government should increase the price and age limit of smoking should be decided. Therefore, it helps to decrease the health cost and improve health.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
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Message: The verb 'should' requires the base form of the verb: 'increase'
Suggestion: increase
...overnment. Firstly, governments should increases the cost of cigarettes and reduce the p...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, look, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, thus, for example, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 1.00243902439 1197% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 5.60731707317 250% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 27.0 33.7804878049 80% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 3.97073170732 227% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1304.0 965.302439024 135% => OK
No of words: 238.0 196.424390244 121% => OK
Chars per words: 5.47899159664 4.92477711251 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.92775363542 3.73543355544 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69202831591 2.65546596893 101% => OK
Unique words: 125.0 106.607317073 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.525210084034 0.547539520022 96% => OK
syllable_count: 399.6 283.868780488 141% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.45097560976 117% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 1.53170731707 326% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Interrogative: 1.0 0.114634146341 872% => Less interrogative sentences wanted.
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 8.94146341463 224% => Too many sentences.
Sentence length: 11.0 22.4926829268 49% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.088503215 43.030603864 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 65.2 112.824112599 58% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 11.9 22.9334400587 52% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 4.65 5.23603664747 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 3.70975609756 189% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 4.09268292683 269% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.162439741304 0.215688989381 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0635828811903 0.103423049105 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0749885587109 0.0843802449381 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106039195263 0.15604864568 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0337623890677 0.0819641961636 41% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 13.2329268293 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.85 61.2550243902 85% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 10.3012195122 85% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.62 11.4140731707 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.83 8.06136585366 97% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 40.7170731707 135% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 11.4329268293 44% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.4 10.9970731707 58% => Gunning_fog is low.
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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