7.Tobacco, mainly in form of cigarettes, is one of the most-widely used drugs in the world. Over a billion adults legally smoke tobacco every day. The long term health costs are high - for smokers themselves, and for the wider community in terms of health

Essay topics: 7. Tobacco, mainly in form of cigarettes, is one of the most-widely used drugs in the world. Over a billion adults legally smoke tobacco every day. The long term health costs are high - for smokers themselves, and for the wider community in terms of health care costs and lost productivity.
Do governments have a legitimate role to legislate, to protect citizens from the harmful effects of their own decisions to smoke, or are such decisions up to the individual?

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Despite many harmful effects smoking is legal in many countries across the world. Over than billion of people smoke cigarettes in world which cause immense health issues like cancer, asthma, cough and many lungs and heart-related diseases.
Most of the people start smoking in college due to pressure of peers which become addiction in long term. Other group of people say life is once and they want to enjoy their life at fullest and many blame destiny for whatever happening in their life. Due to aforementioned reasons i think Government should intervene to enforce such people to stop smoking. On other hand there are large number of smokers who are unaware of adverse of smoking and gave up smoking later on when they understand consequences of smoking.
In many developed and developing countries, Government legislated and enforced people to stop smoking by increasing prices and levying higher taxes on the tobacco products. Further, Government legislated 21 year as age for smoking in many countries. Adults are best to understand good and bad about themselves but Government should run campaigns to make people aware about effects of smoking.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Use simply: 'a billion'.
Suggestion: a billion
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...eir life. Due to aforementioned reasons i think Government should intervene to en...
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Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'if', 'so', 'i think']

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.3 0.268076937826 112% => OK
Verbs: 0.16 0.116061578633 138% => OK
Adjectives: 0.125 0.0759168565197 165% => OK
Adverbs: 0.01 0.0366838410393 27% => Some adverbs wanted.
Pronouns: 0.025 0.0131127313244 191% => OK
Prepositions: 0.155 0.155750635184 100% => OK
Participles: 0.03 0.0379272487307 79% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.6290262464 2.65546596893 99% => OK
Infinitives: 0.04 0.0210936926555 190% => Less infinitives wanted.
Particles: 0.005 0.00175180941692 285% => OK
Determiners: 0.015 0.0948980150116 16% => Some determiners wanted.
Modal_auxiliary: 0.01 0.00437022459523 229% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.025 0.00967000014798 259% => OK

Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1152.0 1161.00487805 99% => OK
No of words: 187.0 196.9 95% => OK
Chars per words: 6.16042780749 5.90752243213 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.69794460899 3.73763899035 99% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.390374331551 0.337110787985 116% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.299465240642 0.247514529752 121% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.171122994652 0.171178102325 100% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.133689839572 0.112407865282 119% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6290262464 2.65546596893 99% => OK
Unique words: 118.0 106.607317073 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.631016042781 0.546246751206 116% => OK
Word variations: 62.0120423401 49.3433353143 126% => OK
How many sentences: 9.0 8.93414634146 101% => OK
Sentence length: 20.7777777778 23.0094962315 90% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.6862795823 42.9750493124 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.0 135.714022679 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7777777778 23.0094962315 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.444444444444 0.689975730869 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.84146341463 78% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.48048780488 135% => OK
Readability: 50.7243018419 47.7609492067 106% => OK
Elegance: 2.48717948718 2.94281807926 85% => OK

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.317549062775 0.418131533498 76% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.102594041753 0.181151798455 57% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0498599980184 0.0850326197045 59% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.582238923309 0.706616315825 82% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.109651621618 0.157042692854 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.144936338627 0.228904883108 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0821089843011 0.108899403657 75% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.300240042835 0.367819155151 82% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0844898465739 0.0812612215331 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.232011810575 0.316326947829 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0373270827177 0.0921553760075 41% => OK

Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70731707317 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.14146341463 350% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.08536585366 24% => More neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 4.0 3.16585365854 126% => OK
Negative topic words: 4.0 0.956097560976 418% => Less negative topic words wanted.
Neutral topic words: 1.0 3.02926829268 33% => OK
Total topic words: 9.0 7.1512195122 126% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

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Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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