Many people think region affect successful persons. What is your opinion

Essay topics: Many people think region affect successful persons. What is your opinion

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Many people thinks that the success behind an individual is the enviournment where that person grown up,But according to me there are other factors which also behind one's success.The capability and determination can be the one factor for this,So if we think then we find that there are houndreds of reason present.

Region where the person spends his childhood days or college days there he developer the quality of leader ship,and he come to know how to be social As we have to go to college school these days and there we meet our friends,Teachers etc.If we talk about the mahatma gandhi ji then he got many leadership awards from his childhood region.

After a specific period of time we have to leave our home town that may be bacause of higher studies or work,So in that situation one have to learn many things As In home town every body find his comfort zone but in out side he don't have that he need to learn how to make situation according to him.for example dhiru bhai ambani who left his house in early age and after this he struggled alot and finally now he rule over the business world in india, Can it be possible if he did n't leave his home.Thus we can say to go out side and get to know the situation is also a great lesson to learn and everybody should get this chance in his life.

Over all we can say for one's success region is not only thing there are lot of factors behind the success of a person.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'finally', 'if', 'may', 'so', 'then', 'thus', 'for example']

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.271428571429 0.268076937826 101% => OK
Verbs: 0.167857142857 0.116061578633 145% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0428571428571 0.0759168565197 56% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0428571428571 0.0366838410393 117% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0928571428571 0.0131127313244 708% => OK
Prepositions: 0.107142857143 0.155750635184 69% => OK
Participles: 0.0107142857143 0.0379272487307 28% => Some participles wanted.
Conjunctions: 2.31926628139 2.65546596893 87% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0464285714286 0.0210936926555 220% => Less infinitives wanted.
Particles: 0.0107142857143 0.00175180941692 612% => OK
Determiners: 0.075 0.0948980150116 79% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0214285714286 0.00437022459523 490% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.025 0.00967000014798 259% => OK

Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1423.0 1161.00487805 123% => OK
No of words: 265.0 196.9 135% => OK
Chars per words: 5.36981132075 5.90752243213 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03470204552 3.73763899035 108% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.264150943396 0.337110787985 78% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.162264150943 0.247514529752 66% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.0905660377358 0.171178102325 53% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0716981132075 0.112407865282 64% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.31926628139 2.65546596893 87% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 106.607317073 136% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.547169811321 0.546246751206 100% => OK
Word variations: 54.3733139271 49.3433353143 110% => OK
How many sentences: 4.0 8.93414634146 45% => More sentences wanted.
Sentence length: 66.25 23.0094962315 288% => Sentence lengths are too long.
Sentence length SD: 187.025900613 42.9750493124 435% => OK
Chars per sentence: 355.75 135.714022679 262% => Less chars per sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 66.25 23.0094962315 288% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 2.25 0.689975730869 326% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.84146341463 104% => OK
Language errors: 16.0 1.48048780488 1081% => OK
Readability: 82.4764150943 47.7609492067 173% => OK
Elegance: 1.28235294118 2.94281807926 44% => Essaays need to be developed more elegantly.

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0610682837269 0.418131533498 15% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.2080043628 0.181151798455 115% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0998370997062 0.0850326197045 117% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 1.0 0.706616315825 142% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 3.72380122987e-16 0.157042692854 0% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0503992092205 0.228904883108 22% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0212991161346 0.108899403657 20% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.215751434452 0.367819155151 59% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0987868705335 0.0812612215331 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0503992092205 0.316326947829 16% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0212991161346 0.0921553760075 23% => OK

Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70731707317 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.14146341463 0% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.08536585366 0% => More neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 3.0 3.16585365854 95% => OK
Negative topic words: 0.0 0.956097560976 0% => OK
Neutral topic words: 0.0 3.02926829268 0% => More neutral topic words wanted.
Total topic words: 3.0 7.1512195122 42% => More topic words wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.

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