Some people believe laws change human behavior. Do you agree with it?
Laws have an effect on human beings primarily because they prevent people from doing things which are harmful to others and society as a whole. There are myriad of concerns arising this that laws only cannot change how people will behave, there has to be a proper implementation of laws alongside social awareness among the masses. This essay will discuss both opinions and conclude how proper implementation of laws in important.
Many countries have developed some laws in recent years to counter the climbing numbers of crimes in society. The laws primarily had an effect on the people which created a fear of strong punishment. But if there is no proper evidence of someone doing the crime the law only can punish the culprit and it can boost their morale in the future to commit the crime again. According to a recent report, the numbers of crimes reported have increased primarily but due to lack of evidence, the authorities were unable to find the culprit.
Such challenges can be solved by improving the surveillance systems and investing in awareness campaigns among the residents. New technologies like CCTV cameras are available easily and can be very fruitful while countering the increasing crime rates. The studies showed that installing security cameras significantly reduced the number of crimes along with finding the right person who committed it. People should also be informed through social media and TV that how they can alert the authorities on time by calling the helplines and sending messages.
To conclude, although laws are very useful in changing the behaviors of humans yet without proper implementation and social campaigns the required results cannot be obtained.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, while, as to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.5418719212 104% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 6.10837438424 164% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 8.36945812808 131% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 5.94088669951 101% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 20.9802955665 48% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 31.9359605911 116% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.75862068966 122% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1424.0 1207.87684729 118% => OK
No of words: 276.0 242.827586207 114% => OK
Chars per words: 5.15942028986 5.00649968141 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07593519647 3.92707691288 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67080845651 2.71678728327 98% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 139.433497537 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.586956521739 0.580463131201 101% => OK
syllable_count: 447.3 379.143842365 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 4.6157635468 22% => OK
Article: 4.0 1.56157635468 256% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.5024630542 112% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.8547409226 50.4703680194 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 118.666666667 104.977214359 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0 20.9669160288 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.58333333333 7.25397266985 36% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.201947430817 0.242375264174 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0713155942908 0.0925447433944 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0592727608507 0.071462118173 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124799110904 0.151781067708 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0592801739391 0.0609392437508 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 12.6369458128 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 53.1260098522 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.9458128079 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 11.5310837438 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.64 8.32886699507 116% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 55.0591133005 154% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.94827586207 111% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.3980295567 108% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 72.0 Out of 90
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