Some people believe that TV is a useful invention. To what extent you agree with the statement. Give your opinion and explain with the observations and examples from your personal experience.
Although the majority of intellectuals assert that television is being used for many purposes, and it has become an important part of everyone’s life; however; others disagree with this statement, and they feel that it is not as useful as intellectuals think. I personally feel that this is one of the elite invention of 20th century.
To being with, it is being used for entertainment. It is possible to claim that there are various movies and serials which entertain the public. Mr Bean, for example, was a show which was broadcasted earlier to entertain to people. As it is known that entertainment is essential to make life easier. Entertainment is one of the useful weapon to deal with stress.
Moreover, it also provides very useful information regarding the world. There is innumerable news which are broadcasted to provide useful information to the public. Typhoon, for example, when was felt in Taiwan in the year 2009, the news was broadcasted on the television so that all denizens could come out from their houses to protect themselves
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In conclusion, although people claim that television is not one of the good invention, but I completely agree with those who assert that this is one the best invention.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, moreover, regarding, so, for example, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 10.5418719212 190% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 6.10837438424 16% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 8.36945812808 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 13.0 5.94088669951 219% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 23.0 20.9802955665 110% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 31.9359605911 81% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 5.75862068966 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1037.0 1207.87684729 86% => OK
No of words: 204.0 242.827586207 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.08333333333 5.00649968141 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.77926670891 3.92707691288 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98262268357 2.71678728327 110% => OK
Unique words: 114.0 139.433497537 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.558823529412 0.580463131201 96% => OK
syllable_count: 313.2 379.143842365 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.71428571429 233% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.931034482759 322% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.5024630542 88% => OK
Sentence length SD: 63.7940902468 50.4703680194 126% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.2727272727 104.977214359 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5454545455 20.9669160288 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.81818181818 7.25397266985 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.33497536946 56% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 6.9802955665 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 2.75862068966 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.145687941586 0.242375264174 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0553787460504 0.0925447433944 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0521072799232 0.071462118173 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0914503294319 0.151781067708 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0370968825268 0.0609392437508 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 12.6369458128 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 53.1260098522 116% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.9458128079 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 11.5310837438 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.93 8.32886699507 95% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 55.0591133005 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.94827586207 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.3980295567 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.1111111111 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 55.0 Out of 90
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