Some people prefer to listen to music while studying, as music has a calming effect on the mind. Others prefer a pin drop silence in order to concentrate on the content they are studying and have an undivided attention while they do so.Which option works

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Some people prefer to listen to music while studying, as music has a calming effect on the mind. Others prefer a pin drop silence in order to concentrate on the content they are studying and have an undivided attention while they do so.

Which option works better for you and why do you think the other option is not viable to ensure a successful study time?

Now in the era, study is the very important for every person because it is the good way to achieve success. Many students listen the music while studying because they says that music can feel fresh and calm to mind. But, some individuals says that peace environment is good for concentrate on the work because at a one time brain work better as compare to brain work, two things at one one time. I will shed light on both views in further paragraphs.

To begin with, there are numerous reason to study in pin drop silence environment. First, the person can concentrate properly on work which they doing because in peace environment no can disturb him. Moreover, main thing is that the all exam was also held in quiet environment so the students will practice in calm environment which is very helpful for exam.

On the other hand, to listen music while studying is not good because the mind was not work properly in both things. Further, while doing studying the brain gets distract for listen songs which is impact in examination time.

To conclude that, every coin has two sides, likewise this topic also has mixed bag. But i think is that while doing studying do not listen the song or watch movies this is not good for brain. Do one work at one time.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: say
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Suggestion: than
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: one
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...wise this topic also has mixed bag. But i think is that while doing studying do n...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, likewise, moreover, so, while, i think, to begin with, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.5418719212 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 8.36945812808 36% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 5.94088669951 135% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 20.9802955665 62% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 31.9359605911 72% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.75862068966 122% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1038.0 1207.87684729 86% => OK
No of words: 226.0 242.827586207 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.59292035398 5.00649968141 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.87727950738 3.92707691288 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.26374033905 2.71678728327 83% => OK
Unique words: 120.0 139.433497537 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.530973451327 0.580463131201 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 315.0 379.143842365 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.57093596059 89% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 4.6157635468 22% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.5024630542 88% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.4595432761 50.4703680194 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.5 104.977214359 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8333333333 20.9669160288 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.5 7.25397266985 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.33497536946 75% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 2.75862068966 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.276238436006 0.242375264174 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.10834255093 0.0925447433944 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0913336087866 0.071462118173 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.180199000744 0.151781067708 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0546768320673 0.0609392437508 90% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 12.6369458128 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 53.1260098522 132% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.9458128079 72% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.34 11.5310837438 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.42 8.32886699507 77% => OK
difficult_words: 27.0 55.0591133005 49% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.94827586207 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.3980295567 88% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.5123152709 95% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 62.2222222222 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 56.0 Out of 90
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