Some people think that books are losing importance as a source of information and entertainment. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Although books are the greatest friend of a human being. Some people believe that the books are loosing as a source of information and entertainment while some disagree with the stance. In this essay, I am going to cater necessary arguments before jumping to the conclusion.
To begin with the positive side, people nowadays becoming less dependent on books due to a massive upsurge in the development of the internet. Moreover, The invention of the internet has changed the way we get information. In the past, books were the only from which we get the information but currently the with use of the internet we can find the books with a single click. For example, a recent survey in America found that around 85% of people rely on the internet to gain the knowledge consequently books are losing importance as an entertainment.
Another pivotal aspect of my stance is, books are also deserted as a way of entertainment because there are many kinds of other entertainment available. For example, people nowadays doing yoga, meditation, learning music, and by which they feel more relaxed and calm and there are many health benefits associated.
To sum up, I firmly believe that although books are the greatest friend of a human being with the passage of time, people are opting other sources as entertainment so they feel relaxed from the stress of life.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Although” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
Although books are the greatest friend of a huma...
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Line 8, column 211, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...y feel relaxed from the stress of life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, if, moreover, so, while, for example, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.5418719212 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 6.10837438424 16% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 8.36945812808 60% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 5.94088669951 84% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 20.9802955665 57% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 31.9359605911 113% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 5.75862068966 191% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1140.0 1207.87684729 94% => OK
No of words: 230.0 242.827586207 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.95652173913 5.00649968141 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89432290496 3.92707691288 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76200250633 2.71678728327 102% => OK
Unique words: 126.0 139.433497537 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.547826086957 0.580463131201 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 358.2 379.143842365 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6551724138 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.5024630542 112% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.7633778886 50.4703680194 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.0 104.977214359 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0 20.9669160288 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.7 7.25397266985 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.234992961466 0.242375264174 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.088257164183 0.0925447433944 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0891949683905 0.071462118173 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.132435373794 0.151781067708 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0621909741258 0.0609392437508 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 12.6369458128 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 53.1260098522 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.9458128079 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 11.5310837438 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.35 8.32886699507 100% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 55.0591133005 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.94827586207 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.3980295567 108% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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