Some people think that books are losing importance as a source of information and entertainment. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Although such topics, in all likelihood, never will yield a consensual agreement, a constructive agreement dialogue on whether books are losing importance as a source of information and entertainment can lead thought-provoking discussions. My view is that irrespective of the numerous arguments that exist on either side, books are losing importance as a source of information and entertainment. Through the course of the essay, I shall put forth my points and calculations by considering both sides of arguments.
There are a number of reasons in favor of my viewpoint. One of them is that people nowadays becoming less dependent on books due to a massive increase in the development of the internet. This is because the invention of the internet has changed the way we get information. For example, a recent survey in Australia has shown that around 85% of people rely on the internet to gain the knowledge consequently books are losing importance as an entertainment.
There are few aspects of the internet that needs special mentioning. Firstly, it is said that with the single click on the internet one can reach to various types of websites by visiting that a person cannot only feel entertained but also a person can gain the knowledge.
I see that there is equally potential evidence to support the arguments I have provided and hence my opinion is that with the developing technology books are losing importance as a source of information and entertainment. I am inclined to believe that innovation in technology has proven the boon for the human’s life.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 42, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[10]
Message: The adverb 'never' is usually put between 'will' and 'yield'.
Suggestion: will never yield
...lthough such topics, in all likelihood, never will yield a consensual agreement, a constructive ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, first, firstly, hence, if, so, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.5418719212 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 8.36945812808 60% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 5.94088669951 168% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 20.9802955665 105% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 31.9359605911 113% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 5.75862068966 313% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1280.0 1207.87684729 106% => OK
No of words: 249.0 242.827586207 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.140562249 5.00649968141 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97237131171 3.92707691288 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.25050227939 2.71678728327 120% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 139.433497537 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.546184738956 0.580463131201 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 402.3 379.143842365 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 4.6157635468 130% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.5024630542 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.1257855255 50.4703680194 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.363636364 104.977214359 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6363636364 20.9669160288 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.09090909091 7.25397266985 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.237583851247 0.242375264174 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0794446899873 0.0925447433944 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0967015278518 0.071462118173 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127984448951 0.151781067708 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0782851990717 0.0609392437508 128% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 12.6369458128 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 53.1260098522 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.9458128079 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.83 11.5310837438 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.85 8.32886699507 106% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 55.0591133005 118% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.94827586207 121% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.3980295567 104% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 72.0 Out of 90
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