Some people think that companies should involve their employees in decision making. To what extent you agree with this concept.
Employees are the backbone of companies. Some people assert that they should be involved in decision-making process whereas others disagree with this statement, and believe their participation can create problems in the decision-making process. I feel that without them a company can never grow; hence, their participation is necessary.
To begin with, it is true that employees are an asset to the organization. Their motivation and self-actualization in the organization is very important. If they are not motivated,
they may feel isolated, and will never think about the organization. Several studies show that employees' motivation rose significantly when they are involved in the decision-making process. Moreover, it has also been seen that motivated employees always tried to give their best to raise the standard of the company.
Furthermore, sharing knowledge is a key success, according to me, employees can understand the demand of customer in an effective way. A salesman, for example, always stay in link with employees; hence, he is the only person who can understand, what customer demands or not. Therefore, the employees should be involved in the decision- making process.
At the end, I would like to agree with those people, who say employees should be involved in decision-making process. Because they are the pillar of an organization, so their participation and motivation is important.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, hence, if, may, moreover, so, therefore, whereas, for example, i feel, it is true, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 10.5418719212 142% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 6.10837438424 164% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 8.36945812808 60% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 5.94088669951 135% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 20.9802955665 114% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 31.9359605911 81% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 5.75862068966 208% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1203.0 1207.87684729 100% => OK
No of words: 218.0 242.827586207 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.51834862385 5.00649968141 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84250218741 3.92707691288 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.35501777401 2.71678728327 123% => OK
Unique words: 124.0 139.433497537 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.56880733945 0.580463131201 98% => OK
syllable_count: 364.5 379.143842365 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 4.6157635468 173% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.5024630542 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.6287136052 50.4703680194 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.5384615385 104.977214359 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.7692307692 20.9669160288 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.84615384615 7.25397266985 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.12807881773 121% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.33497536946 56% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 2.91625615764 137% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.301953684872 0.242375264174 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103159224407 0.0925447433944 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0717554146296 0.071462118173 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.166478218531 0.151781067708 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0592084419349 0.0609392437508 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 12.6369458128 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 53.1260098522 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.9458128079 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.44 11.5310837438 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.98 8.32886699507 96% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 55.0591133005 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.94827586207 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.3980295567 81% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.5123152709 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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