Some people think law changes human behavior. Do you agree or disagree?

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Some people think law changes human behavior. Do you agree or disagree?

Various factors have significant impact on the behaviour of human. Some experts opine that law has significant impact on their mood. In my perspective, I also assert that law changes their behaviour. This essay will discuss how law affect their behaviour.
Indeed, only when government make rules in order to maintain balance in the society, these are abided by them. Traffic rules for example, have made by the government in all the nations. These rules are abided by everyone because of the fear of punishment by the government. As this fear was not possible during the time when the rules for the traffic were not imposed.
In those days, denizens neglect the traffic congestion; they did not pay any attention on this. They always parked their motor- vehicles on the roads which caused traffic congestion. But, nowadays, the scenario is different; they give preference to the traffic rules imposed by the public figures. Since the implementation of rules, the traffic congestion has reduced. A recent survey reveals that all the denizens park their automobiles in the parking. Thereby, accident on roads has also reduced.
Thus, it is possible to agree that law changes the human behavior. As in ancient time, people parked their vehicles on roads without caring about others, but because of traffic law, nowadays they park their vehicles in the parking area.

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Average: 5.5 (1 vote)
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, thus, for example

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 10.5418719212 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 6.10837438424 16% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 8.36945812808 12% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 5.94088669951 118% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 20.9802955665 119% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 31.9359605911 97% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 5.75862068966 191% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1145.0 1207.87684729 95% => OK
No of words: 224.0 242.827586207 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.11160714286 5.00649968141 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.86867284054 3.92707691288 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53520728709 2.71678728327 93% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 139.433497537 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.566964285714 0.580463131201 98% => OK
syllable_count: 353.7 379.143842365 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 4.6157635468 173% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.71428571429 175% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 12.6551724138 126% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.5024630542 68% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.6191997399 50.4703680194 57% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 71.5625 104.977214359 68% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.0 20.9669160288 67% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.25 7.25397266985 31% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 6.9802955665 43% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 2.75862068966 217% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 2.91625615764 240% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.126864567992 0.242375264174 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0513730254861 0.0925447433944 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.100854024899 0.071462118173 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0888619486501 0.151781067708 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0916801515518 0.0609392437508 150% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 12.6369458128 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 53.1260098522 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 10.9458128079 80% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.77 11.5310837438 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.56 8.32886699507 103% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 55.0591133005 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.94827586207 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.3980295567 73% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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