Sports is the game of physical and mental which entertain with their skills to the people. The skills are rarely found in human. I totally disagree with the statement that, Some people think dangerous sports should be banned. I'll explain my reason for this essay.
Firstly, It is most necessary to consider that sports are one of the very important entertainment sources which unite people together whereas sports skills are rarely found in people. I think in every sport except indoor like chess, cardboard, etc. have the risk. Most of the people who participate in the sports have the security of their life. The sports like Cricket, Football, WWF, are the most famous games in the world and these games are very entertaining as well. These are also very economical and huge eye-catching.
In other hands, I'll say that the sportsman should have life insurance and play at their own risk because they are very crucial people in the world and most importantly of their family. I also reckon that we should encourage them to give their best rather than scarring to the player. This motivates youngster or children also.
Therefore, I will conclude that the dangerous game should not be banned but they should be playing under the export security. So, it should be free to choose because all game is crucial for a nation.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, so, therefore, well, whereas, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 10.5418719212 133% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 6.10837438424 115% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 8.36945812808 84% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 5.94088669951 135% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 20.9802955665 119% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 31.9359605911 78% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 5.75862068966 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1097.0 1207.87684729 91% => OK
No of words: 226.0 242.827586207 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.85398230088 5.00649968141 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.87727950738 3.92707691288 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.37452362386 2.71678728327 87% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 139.433497537 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.561946902655 0.580463131201 97% => OK
syllable_count: 331.2 379.143842365 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 4.6157635468 173% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.65517241379 27% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6551724138 119% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.5024630542 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 48.9859843901 50.4703680194 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 73.1333333333 104.977214359 70% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.0666666667 20.9669160288 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.53333333333 7.25397266985 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.33497536946 56% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 6.9802955665 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.300177427002 0.242375264174 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0919348979689 0.0925447433944 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.116962051198 0.071462118173 164% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.184888656168 0.151781067708 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0689012834588 0.0609392437508 113% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.9 12.6369458128 70% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 53.1260098522 122% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 10.9458128079 73% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.26 11.5310837438 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.52 8.32886699507 90% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 55.0591133005 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.94827586207 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.3980295567 77% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.5123152709 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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