Some people think that keeping pets is good for children while others think it is dangerous and unhealthy. Which opinion do you agree with? Discuss both options and give examples.
The importance of keeping pets which was always debatable has now become more controversial with many people claiming that it is beneficial while others reject this notion. The substantial influence of this trend has sparked the controversy over the potential impact in recent years. In my opinion, the former proposition appears to be more rational. This essay will explain both positive and negative impact of this trend and thus lead to a logical conclusion.
There are myriad of reason which will further explain keeping pets in home is good for children is one of the most preponderant fact from is that children play with pets as a friends and they can enjoy their free with it. Another pivotal aspect of this trend is keeping pets at home is beneficial for children because they have care of their owner in any difficult situation. Needless to say, all merits stand in a good stead.
However, there are some pitfalls to negate this argument some people think that pets are dangerous and unhealthy. Firstly, pets spread dangerous diseases so sometime children can effect to this disease and they have ill. Moreover, some bread of pets are dangerous eventually dangerous pets bite the children which create problem into children life.
According to argument aforementioned above, one can reach to a conclusion, keeping pets is beneficial for children but some drawbacks of keeping pets at home so it is the responsibility of individual kept those type of pets which are not dangerous.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, moreover, so, thus, while, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 10.5418719212 142% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 8.36945812808 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 5.94088669951 118% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 20.9802955665 95% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 31.9359605911 100% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.75862068966 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1252.0 1207.87684729 104% => OK
No of words: 247.0 242.827586207 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.06882591093 5.00649968141 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96437052324 3.92707691288 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66852912937 2.71678728327 98% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 139.433497537 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.550607287449 0.580463131201 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 386.1 379.143842365 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 4.6157635468 22% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.5024630542 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.5844331582 50.4703680194 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.818181818 104.977214359 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4545454545 20.9669160288 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.72727272727 7.25397266985 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 2.75862068966 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.335611855715 0.242375264174 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.12133710829 0.0925447433944 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0898384380919 0.071462118173 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.194545043331 0.151781067708 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0588587872939 0.0609392437508 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 12.6369458128 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 53.1260098522 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.9458128079 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 11.5310837438 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.24 8.32886699507 99% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 55.0591133005 100% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.94827586207 111% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.3980295567 104% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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